Reviews for absence
diffident chapter 1 . 8/20/2008
Good poem. It's simple but emotive.

Ashelin chapter 1 . 8/20/2008
Miscarriage is so brutal on the soul, and I think the title itself was like a beacon proclaiming the void it truly is. Absence of something you didn't know, but should have been destined to have. You expressed that very well in this. Great job.
SEMMU chapter 1 . 8/20/2008
A very sad picture you've painted. Well written too. Thanks for sharing.