|Reviews for The Folly of a Monster Love|
| Dark Cyborg chapter 1 . 11/24/2015
When will you put this back?
| peterquill chapter 46 . 1/5/2015
I read this story long ago, and am delighted to know that you are still as excited about it as I am! Of course, I stand by my previous anonymous review that if you submit this to a publishing house, you will be immediately put on book shelves. I'm not sure if this story is more of a personal hobby and you'd rather not get it out there, but I personally know that I will be one of the many that would love a personal hard copy of this delightful story.
Best wishes to you, and good luck with your editing!
| eienkiseki chapter 45 . 10/8/2014
This story is amazing and you should be proud of yourself for writing and completing it. No matter the rough-ness and the places it needs editing, i believe you outdone yourself in the plot and character development. No matter what i won't forget the emotions i experienced while reading this story, it really felt like i was in Alma's shoes and experiencing every bit of anguish she felt. For this I am grateful you gave them a happy ending, my only wish is for there to a bit more solid conclusion. I would sincerely like to see them married and have kids *cry* Amazing story! 10/10
| AlyssaChu chapter 45 . 4/7/2014
Beautiful. Just beautiful. Ending was great. I think you can publish this. Its a great piece, unique and well written. One of the best stories I've read here so far. There are a few misspelled words but nothing too major, especially on grammar. In fact I think your grammar is almost if not perfect. You are a great person man. Thank the gods that i read this when it was completed because every chapter I finish, i forget to review because I'm all too eager to read the next. I'll say this again, it is a great story.
| anon chapter 45 . 4/1/2014
Well...well, well, well
This was possibly one of the most amazing fictions (on and on ) i have ever read. Some of the most brave and best authors are the ones that are willing to kill off one of their well-developed characters, like Lilith and Kale and Lane and (sorta) Illias. I'd like to thank you for creating this masterpiece of words and letting me experience Alma's life and Illias's mysteriousness and Lilith's coolness and every other intricate idea you pieced together in this wonderful story.
I shall go cry tears of happiness in peace now. ;)
| Ria chapter 45 . 3/14/2014
Wow... I've been holding back tears for so long. I'm so happy this story has a happy ending. Actually a couple of tears did come out, but shh... no one needs to know that.
| The Undecisive Thinker chapter 45 . 3/14/2014
I must say that this was really well written, and the plotline was pretty solid too. It was definitely one of the better stories I've come across on Fictionpress, and I really enjoyed reading it, even if I don't like Illias c: Good job!
| The Undecisive Thinker chapter 44 . 3/14/2014
My heart just kind of broke for Warren.
| The Undecisive Thinker chapter 43 . 3/14/2014
I like how this is going, so far :) Despite the numerous people who probably ship Illias and Alma, I never really thought they would be good for each other.
There are still two chapters left, though, so for all I know you might somehow bring Illias back :p
I should mention that even though I don't like him, I still felt sad when he died :c
| The Undecisive Thinker chapter 33 . 3/13/2014
I really, sincerely hope she doesn't end up with Illias. I mean, first he rapes her, then he hits her, and he constantly treats her like shit. I get that he's a demon and whatnot, but their entire relationship is just incredibly abusive and seems to be selling the message that it's okay if someone physically and mentally harms you as long as you love them.
On a different note, I really like the story so far :) To be honest, I kind of have a crush on Kale.
| NavyBlueHoney chapter 45 . 2/26/2014
I will love you and this story forever. The kind of transformation that a good book with good depth will probably never be quantified by any human means, but that definitely doesn't undermine the value that good writing carries inherently. This story is fucking amazing, I can tell you that much, and I feel like I've grown up as much as Alma has. Despite the fact that I really dislike her name-no offense-, you've reflected me so accurately into a single fictional character and that itself is a testament to the therapeutic power and beauty of writing.
Please don't stop writing. It would be a travesty to the universe to be depraved of the quality and enlightenment you pour into your writing. As a self-proclaimed existentialist myself, I loved your forays into philosophy and I just wanted to say that given the opportunity, I would probably marry Kale-but yknow, sans evil dude selling his soul, etc etc.
The human condition has always been something that we've never been able to deal with completely and this story is proof that even though it might take a heck of a long time, the human condition is also defined by the hunger and the capability for progress.
In short, cheers.
| Guest chapter 12 . 1/9/2014
The ending for this chapter was really cute up until that last sentence. By the Nine, I really did not see that coming!
| Guest chapter 8 . 1/9/2014
I can't help but to think about what my high school psychology teacher told us. There is something, a disorder almost, where psychology students "self diagnose" disorders for themselves. It's kinda interesting to see it here, and I don't know if it was intentional or not, but I do like it.
Just wanted to say that! Also, I am really enjoying the story. It's so interesting, and written so beautifully! I can't stop reading (_)
| storiesrock chapter 5 . 1/2/2014
I think that this is the...third or forth time I'm reading this story and it never fails to excite me. Oh how I wish Mr. Grey existed in real life *sigh*
| Damned to heaven chapter 45 . 12/5/2013
Just finished reading this after starting it earlier in the night. It's 2:33 am now, here in the U.K.
You know after you've read a good book and you're just left in a state of bliss? That's me right now. I wish I could be more constructive but all I can think is "love loved it" and "that was awesome", so yeah.
The only "loose end" I wanted address (it really isn't a loose end just my curiosity) is his reaction to Alma and Warren's little relationship. I loved a jealous Illias, he was lust worthy. Btw, Alma not cool but I'll let that slide 'cause in my head you were just grieving and Warren just happened to be there. That's what I'm going with.