Reviews for The Folly of a Monster Love |
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LiNdSaY.AP chapter 40 . 1/31/2011 Ah, I was so glad to see this in my inbox: Folly of a Monster Love-Chapter: 40. And you deliver, every time. And I am really anxious to read more, so I hope you update again soon! I might have said it before, but I really admire your style; you don't seem to hold back in anything. Good, good stuff. Keep it up, I can't wait! |
to bothered to sign in chapter 40 . 1/31/2011 Dude, im so stoked for the next chapter. here comes the action and pace and...stuff. oh god, you're a great uathor. keep it up, man. |
the iguanameister chapter 1 . 1/31/2011 My friend just violently assaulted me over her excitement for this story being updated. When you become a famous author for your amazing stories, I will be able to say that I suffered injury reading your first work. Your story is awesome. That is all. |
Alixermixer chapter 40 . 1/31/2011 I just started reading this yesterday and I am so glad that you are going to continue to update. Love this story! |
xxPetitexx chapter 39 . 1/16/2011 Hey there :) This is the best story Ive read on ,Ive been in love with it since the first chapter,and it keeps getting better! I like that this story doesnt go too fast,its slow,but good slow,you know what I mean? its perfect. I love the relationship between Alma and Illias,too:it makes me smile,but it also makes me want to tear my eyes out.I love it.I love you. I hope you find your motivation soon :) |
blackflower217 chapter 1 . 12/16/2010 omg, i love your story! the cool thing is it's not just their romance, there is a bigger picture, a lot more depth than other stories. this is epic. hey, have you seen the tumblr blog for follies? i came across it a couple days ago. there's a fanmade trailer *O* just type in thefollyofamonsterlove. pretty cool lol |
Fee18 chapter 39 . 11/23/2010 It's been a month since you last updated! To leave your readers hanging for so long at such a good point in the story is not only rude, it is cruel! Oh, by the way, if you haven't already figured out the obvious, GREAT STORY! |
chicagobabe chapter 39 . 11/16/2010 hey! i finnaly got time to read the story! im missed it and omg cannot wait for the next chapter. poor Alma! |
Mrs. MJackson chapter 39 . 11/15/2010 hey, i know you said you had been lingering on this chapter before the chapter right after it is the climax and you had been waiting to get to it for so long...well I've read that many best sellers such as Sephanie Meyer and Cassandra Clare don't even write their chapter books in order. sometimes they will write the 8th chapter or the 9th when they're still stuck on trying to the end the 3rd or 4th. I just thought maybe you were having trouble with writing in order and the lack of motivation was coming from that. You're a lovely writer. if you're stuck on one chapter, but you know what you want to happen in future chapter, then write those chapters and come back tot he one you had problems with. The completion of the future chaptes will probably motivate you even more to finish the chapters you were having problems with...just a bit of advice from a friendly reviewer. your story is awesome. update soon! ...and please, really...update soon. :-) |
Mrs. MJackson chapter 30 . 11/14/2010 I absolutely love this story and am thrilled that I found it. you are a terrific writer and I am simply blown away at the details, lovely writing style, the depths of your characters, the creativity, and so much more. I really hope you continue to update this story and finish it one day soon because I am dying to find out with happens to Alma and Illias, Ser, and whether they will be able to live happily ever after *sigh* lol, anyway update soon! I love this story! |
Intenserainbo chapter 39 . 11/10/2010 Okay, so I have this story on my story alerts and I totally forgot what this story was about. So, I had to reread the whole story from beginning to this chapter. It was worth it though, and for some reason it was better then I remember it. But anyway, I'm loving this story. Keep it up!:] |
TheTruthAboutForever chapter 39 . 11/1/2010 You know I can't for the life of me remember if I've reviewed or not. Hmm well I just might be repeating somethings I said if I have reviewed. In the beginning the story was a whole lot of rocky and mistakes but still worth reading. The subject matter doesn't really flow like it should, I feel a struggle with the story, like a tension(hah, I sound like Lilith!). Despite this you've managed to create an awesome story. Some parts are doubtful, but the further along you go with this, the better it seems to get. I can't even tell you how many favorite quotes I have from this story. You get to the heart of the matter and Alma's revelations are real and can be used in our own reality and put to our own personal stories. If you ever get this published it'd definitely be like Shakespeare, with all of the famous quotes that everyone knows. It's amazing keep it up! I can't wait to read more! |
September Stone chapter 39 . 10/26/2010 Woohoo! Cant wait for more! |
E. M. Isle chapter 39 . 10/26/2010 the new chapter is brilliant. i'm completely stunned. it is truly amazing. i'm grateful you put a summary at the beginning of the chapter, otherwise i probably wouldn't have been able to catch up with the plot. again, there are unbelievably beautiful sentences. i can't express how much i love those. they make your story unique and fabulous. the only thing i think could be improved is the sex scene. somehow it seems a little cold and distanced, but i can't really say why. in my opinion it just lacks feelings, not overly much, but it just stuck out to me. i'm happy you're back and updating :) can't wait for another update |
autumnsprite chapter 39 . 10/25/2010 this story is so intense, so beutiful! I really hope that Illias and Alma have their happy ending! |