once agian, another incredible chapter(:

cannot wait for the next installment.

:D

I haven't read this story in awhile, but I'm glad I stumbled upon it again in my bookmarks! I'm really intrigued to find out what the outcome of this story is, and I am desperately wondering what'll happen to Alma from now on. I admire her courage and I think you've done a great job of developing her character - in fact, I'd have to say that about most of the characters in this story. Great job!

BUT HOW IS ALMA (oops caps lock) going to do it? like leeloo in the fith emelemt?

Wow I remember so long ago when I read this story and then abandoned Fictionpress for the longest of time... it wasn't until a few days ago that I re-discovered it and have now read all of the available chapters. I am very glad I did so, too! I cannot wait for more!

Hm I"m not sure whether Alma using her powers is goingto be good or bad, though I suppose we'll soon find out! Cant wait for the next update! :) Keep up the good work!

A lot going on in this chapter, good and bad. Wonder what the outcome will be of all of this. If I had a habit of biting my nails, this would be a good time lol.

I've just finished reading the first thirty-seven chapters of your monster story ;). It's kind of my favourite right now, and I'm kind of in love with the plotline. Not just kind of, actually! I found you on the SKoW website ). I'm reading Jodi Picoult's The Tenth Circle right now, at the same time as this, and one of the characters in that book is a college professor who teaches a course on Dante's Inferno. It's funny that I'm reading these two particular stories at the same time, because I find myself drawing parallels between your demons and the ones in the other book which is of course more centered in reality. Really looking forward to the next chapter! Wonderful work.

Poor Alma, she does through so much mess.

But she's a great character. I truly love her.

Thanks for the chapter! It was great! Update soon!

I remain your loyal reader,

Serai Rhifune

Great chapter! I loved it! Alma has certainly grown a lot throughout this story and it's always great to see such good character development within a story.

I'm really nervous about everything now haha!

From A Fanfiction Angel

i love the new chapter. the last two chapters disappointed me a litte, but this one is amazing. i just don't like to read a stroy chapter by chapter, it's a lot more confusing and hard to follow than reading a story as a whole. but this chapters was great, truly great and i'm looking forward to your next update

Thank you

Gah! Alma is so.. I really don't know what to say.

I'm grinning now. This is so damned intense!

And OMGG! Alma has powers~~ And I can't wait to see what's it.

I hope Illias and Alma get a happy ending!

Just don't end it abruptly like some authors do.

Make it worth while, okay?

Love,

Deli .x

i hope alma will survive n win this battle. i dont wan her to die

That was the hardest and longest recognition of feelings between two people that I have ever read, but I guess with Illias there is no other

The beginning is a little fast paced, but you write well.

You tend to overdo your adjectives...makes it hard to read. Sometimes, less is more. I have to read over all the adjectives just to get what you're saying.

The dream/sex scene was interesting. Makes me want to read more.