I cannot believe I've missed TWO whole updates but I'm making up for it now :) The intensty of this chapter was staggering and while I dislike lover's spats, this was emotional and well-written enough to be touching rather than overdone so amazing job!

hehe. opps. i bymistakley pressed the submit button to early on the review down there. anyways.. dude, your so talented! just they way your write and the story bah its just so amazing. i loved this chapter, hehe i tink i say that to almost every chapter review. but cannot for the next update.. This power she has sounds prettay cool. and what she feels for Illias she needs to let it out! lol.

~ Chicagobabe

dude, ur talented!

She sure is in denial of how she and Illias feels. I hope she can come to terms with it :D Because of that she found out she might have some sort of power she could use against Ser - the suspense is killing me. I can't wait for more! Is Illias going to get the truth about what Ser said to her out of her?

I just wanted to say that I absolutely love your story! The way you write is amazing; it's almost poetic, for lack of a better term. After reading this chapter, I don't hate Illias as much anymore. But he's not totally off the hook yet. I love that Alma stood up to him, though. I really hope you update soon because I look forward to reading this story every day!

That was amazing! Who knew Alma was capable of that kind of thing! I'm so impressed.

Illias loves her..I know it. He should admit it, that bugger.

Update soon! This story is so good!

I remain your loyal reader,

Serai Rhifune

I was so ecstatic to read the update! Thanks so much! I really am loving this story.

Hmm interesting... so Alma has some sort of power or energy shall I say now? I wonder if Illias knew this...

i wonder what power does alma possess?

I love the progress, grl! I love how amazing you write! You HAVE TO CONSIDER getting published because it would be easier for you to make it as a writer since you are TALENTED! I still don't know why you wouldn't pursue a career as one. Maybe this can be published after some work I guess LOL! UPDATE ASAP!

This was a really, really, really good chapter :3. Well not the sad feeling parts but a lot of good information was shared and wow Alma's powers are coming about. I wonder if it has to do with Illias sharing his blood with her and her traveling to the underworld and Ser somehow triggering something inside of her. I'm getting all giddy with excitement and fear at what is to come in the following chapters. I so badly want a happy ending but something tells me that might not happen or it will only be half way happy. Either way I love this story :3.

Gah, good chapter. The main character is always special though :/ But I suppose it fits.

Thanks for the update :)

I'm sorry that Illias isn't really my favorite type of hero because he's more edgy than sweet, but I can sense that you've put a lot of effort into creating all your characters. I respect you because I can sense that you do take your story seriously, I mean, your writing style is so polished that I envy you.

Um, I'm not very sure, but I hope that all the sex between Illias and Alma is consensual. I mean, Illias is some sort of alpha male, and I'm worried that he might think that it's okay to rape Alma. Well, I've expected the sex scene in this chapter to turn me off, but luckily, I realize that it's tastefully written. I feel that sex between Illias and Alma in this chapter is kinda like a waltz-they've to take care of each other, otherwise they won't enjoy themselves. I've hoped that the relationship between them can remain platonic forever, but since this story is M-rated, I know that you'll include sex.

I can't explain why I feel so sorry for Warren here, as though he's a lost little puppy. I hope that he'll have a happy ending, and I hope that he won't become envious of Illias.