1) You know, I've been so jaded nowadays that I keep telling myself that Illias isn't a figment of Alma's imagination. Haha.

2) Hmm... I think that this chapter is really well-written, because the stakes are so high.

1) I've expected the ring to be an all-powerful ring, but aw, it's just some sort of placebo.

2) Haha, I've read your A/N, and my first reaction is "Wow, what a coincidence!"

1) Hey, if I ever see a schoolmate with a bruised neck, I'll be alarmed, though I might be too shy to ask anything.

2) I picture Illias as some sort of guardian angel. Oh, by the way, are the demons in this story all fallen angels?

Oh gosh, I can feel my heart beating so rapidly now... On one hand, I don't think that Alma deserves to be dragged into a power struggle, but on the other hand, I hope that what doesn't kill her will make her stronger.

Hmm, when a guy seems too handsome to be true, then he might have been a demon.

Hahaha, Alma's mum kinda reminds me of mine! My mum once told me that if any university provides an escort service, then this means that it isn't really very safe. By the way, I hope that Alma's nightmares won't ever come true, otherwise she'll be in danger.

Yes! You go Alma! In all truths, I only liked Illias as the mysterious stalker, after that phase I started to dislike the man (morelike demon). I'm glad Alma has stood up for herself, even though it resulted in defeat and a slap (Pushes my dislike for Illias to a faint hate). But yes, so very happy with Alma right now.

Oh and Kale? I love him. Great guy, smart one too. I wonder, after this is all over, will he and Alma ever meet up or something? I really love the guy.

Sad day about the whole you know, rape thing and whatever. (Wow. That's blunt)

Also, continuity problem. Illias breaks down the bathroom door, and then later it's up again. Not a huge deal, but whatever. :)

... I think Alma will die if Illias ever decides to put her out of her misery.

I'm kind of glad Warren got punched in the face too...

In the library, when they're kissing, you switch tenses sometimes. Just sos you know.

Yay! Illias was sweet! I have a question. Why do they call her Mal? Is it just a weird backwards nickname for Alma?

I am, in fact, truly enjoying the story, as you so nicely put it. I'm glad I read fast - it makes the story go faster.

So... this is good. Like, I'm actually not finding anything I have problems with, which is rare even in published works. So, I'm happy.

Oh... Suspense.

Well, crap. That was supposed to be for the first chapter. So I'll say that the dude is sufficiently creepy in the second chapter, and her paranoia is believable, which is something I've never managed to achieve, and rarely see here. :)