were u self conscious?

sorry fr not reviewing earlier but the story is slow.

it was fast-paced at the beginning of the story but now its slow.

as in no major actions, no meetings, no fighting with the underground and all.

right now there's only all sex and fights with illias.

and that too is dragging on and on.

i hope it'll improve(:

Self-concious because of lack of reviews? You must be crazy! You have more reviews then most, even on the last few chapters.

Yay! Some drama! I think that the relationship between Illias and Alma is being stressed a little too much. That might just be my opinion but you just seem to be going on and on about how they can't seem to keep a stable relationship. But otherwise, the story is great! I love it and the plot is amazing! The characters are complex and still growing in development which is good, so keep writing! I look forward to the next update!

I actually like the slow pace of tghis, its very unusual but the development of the relationships and characters is what makes this great. Although, i suppose it wouldnt be good to lose track of the sight that she is in danger, because i have forgotten about that, when reading these last few chapters.

I WANT THE NEXT CHAPTER TO BE POSTED WITH HASTE! I hate the long breaks they leave you hanging and i forget the plot :(

God this whole situation is conflicting, i want to simultaneously beat Illias up and then ravage him and express my undying love for him :D

Trust me you have nothing to worry about when it comes to your writing, I'm not sure about other people but I haven't been able to get onto Fictionpress for a while lol. Anyway this is another great chapter, although I have to say the angst is really killing me a bit. Thank you.

OMG good stuf! SER better be hott lol!

love this story...so please hurry up and post the next chapter ]

This was amazing...as usual! :) The character development is realistic and,therefore, extremely well done. I'm glad you stuck with a good, solid pace rather than try to rush for the sake of more action scenes. After all, scenes like these-the quiet moments between the characters-the interim is what really pulls the story together. Anyway, I hope you got your inspiration. ;)

Omg I love them so much. They are SO hot. Dang. I have to fan myself off.

Thank you for updating! I can't wait to see where this story goes!

I remain your loyal reader,

Serai Rhifune

Seriously intense chapter, these things are like stories themselves! I loved the basketball bit in the night, it was so...intimate, and i think a beautiful moment in the book, as corny as that sounds. God the frustration that i feel though! One minute he's warm and the next ice cold, but i like the slow pace at which we're learning more about again, i really feel Almas emotions as she feels them, like that bit when Illias said 'we cant be here right now.', i felt the hurt, frustration and humiliation but i still love him, you make him such an amazing character even if i do want to jump in there and slap him sometimes :D Loving Almas philosophy of life and Illias's, as a matter of fact, as dpressing as they may be, their little debates are very thought, provoking.

Really, really anticipating the next one, this was a brilliant chapter!

I just knew that the next chapter after they got close again would turn sour. But that ending, with him speaking his mind in that way was a nice way to soften us up before you mention that Alma will be going to the Underground to see Ser. And I already don't like Sal, I got all sequenty eyed when she was talking to Illias, I'm sure she means well but I don't like her simply for the fact that she has personal history with Illias and its making Alma feel bad.

u cant blame alma for being jeolous. jus curious, can illias make alma pregnant?

This. Wow. I. Wow.

I like it. Quite a bit. It deserves a better review.

But. Just.

Wow. )

oh, okay this story has kept me reading yeaterday till 2am and im hooked! gotta updaye soon :) loven it :)

Thank you for writing.

I always look forward to reading

your next chapter. I am glad Alma

is realising she does love Illias.

Can't wait to read what happens with

Sal's return.