CG on the 100k word mark and Happy Birthday. I'm thoroughly enjoying the story and the characters, can't wait to see where you take us!

Make no mistake, it most certainly was pleasant!

Especially the shower scene...*takes a minute to herself to fan off* Boy was that hot.

You did a lovely job with this chapter - it was perfect. I love the dialogue at the end, too. I couldn't have imagined you making it any better than it is. Seriously, perfection.

Update soon, lovey! And happy (belated) birthday!

I remain your loyal reader,

Serai Rhifune

HAPPY BIRTHDAY! Great chapter but most importantly happy birthday to you.

P.S. If it was belated, I'm so sorry x

MJ

Happy Birthday! :)

Happy Birthday and congrats on the 100,0 word mark!

Loved Illias the pep talk, ha.

Can't wait to see their new hide out.

nice update!

very high in...er...whats it? oh yh, erotica land...

unno i think u made illias have sex with alma to "save" her just cos u WANTED to include it...regardless whether there's any saving involved or whatnot. I guess it's nice to gloss over pure smut with all this " hero business and i'm doing this for ur own good" mantra

*snorts*

i'm not complaining tho. i applaud u for doing it. it's very refreshing and erm very...wow-worthy.

Update soon! Tho, not TOO soon cos that'd just kill your hands :)

X

This was a very pleasant chapter and as you said a nice transition to whats coming next. "We torture the ones we love the most as a test to see how long they’ll stick around. The world is just seeing what you’re made of, and since you’re still alive, it has obviously left your little piece of it alone, just making you think it’s turned its back on you.” Did you come up with that? Its very beautiful. You know this was another wonderful chapter so I won't continue to phrase it I just hope you come out with the next one really soon ]. Happy Birthday!_

Jesus, i felt everything Alma went through when he burnt her things. I could live without the clothes and all that, but book and pictures- hell no. The memories belonging to them would be lost. I think i would have been in hysterics and a lot more bitchy at him by the end of it.

Very good, very good. :) And happy birthday, yeah?

-OHS

Good chapter. I am glad Alma is finally deciding to be stronger. I was getting SO tired of her whining.

Just one note, and I am sure you did not mean this to come out this way, but...

The lines, "She wondered if she would be forced to leave parts of herself behind until she had nothing but her name and the clothes on her back to call her own. Had she listened, had he informed her better, perhaps things would have turned out differently, but with the arrival of that single, ominous box, his efforts had turned desperate."

That made it seem like it was Alma's fault that she got raped. I don't think you mean it to be like this, but that was how it came off to me.

Oh my god, talk about a bomb shell! I did NOT see that coming!

Wow, I couldn't stop reading. I went to bed

this morning at 3 am. I just finished the last

chapter. I am addicted to your story. Can't wait

to see what happens next. In a previous post you

mentioned you had a picture of what you thought

Illias looked like, could you please email it to me?

Thanks again.

:)

I just found this story and I can't stop reading it.

Thank you for writing.

I’m a psychology student too. And I’d be freaked out if I was required to do stitches for such a serious injury too.

As usual, this was very well written. Your descriptions are especially strong and you have a knack of covering every minor detail relevant to the scene. I love that. It makes the story seem so real, its almost I’m there with them and reading each chapter is truly a pleasure.

You made the injury and the task of stitching it up really grotesque. Pardon me if I come off as biased, the only reason I choose psychology over veterinary medicine was my hate for all things surgical. *nervous laugh*

Of course, my love for psychology still stands strong.

I’m rambling.

Aw well, hope you update sooner next time around.

Cheers,

Winged Unicorn.

p.s: would you mind sending me the character pictures? I’ll send you email address in a private msg later if its allrite...

this chapter was adorable and scary at the same time! You portrayed alma's freak out really well! (i know i would be like that at the prospect of stitching someone back together!)Thanks for the update!