Reviews for The Folly of a Monster Love
Taren Elle chapter 22 . 4/5/2009
Geez he really got messed up, so glad he's ok. Can't wait for the next chappy.
DarkestOfNights chapter 22 . 4/5/2009
This was another wonderful chapter, in the manner of the words used not the fact that Illias was hurt. It was nice how you showed us that Illias can be weak and vulnerable too, lets us know that he isn't superman as you said. Keep up the great work, I look forward to the next chapter ].
DaniD3 chapter 22 . 4/5/2009
Once a month...ehh I'll take it. lol At least you are updating~!

I sympathize with poor Alma in this chapter..Blood...ew. That would be very very hard for me to have to do too. But I suppose she had little choice.

Still loving this story..and looking forward to the coming chapter with their traveling and different location. Great update :)
Hannah C. Thaw chapter 22 . 4/5/2009
Sewing skin would be so difficult and gross. Good job!
Kar00 chapter 22 . 4/5/2009
Don't worry! The editing is fine; besides, I reckon you stayed up all night working on this.. as a reader I feel bad. Almost seems like we're imposing homework on you.

But the end result came out as another wonderful chapter, even if it was a bit graphic and grotesque in description. I hate looking at big open wounds and.. all that.. first aid stuff. Brave, brave Alma.
SeraiRhifune chapter 22 . 4/5/2009
Such a sweet chapter! I love it!

I remain yours ever faithfully,

Serai Rhifune
pandorka42 chapter 22 . 4/5/2009
Fantastic! Gruesomely awesome. Excellent description as always, and the way you don't hesitate to write the reality of the situation is always refreshing. No skipping the ugly bits of a story like this. :)

Hope you have a good sleep! You deserve it for a chapter like this. xD

kolapup chapter 21 . 3/15/2009
your story has captivated me with its intriguing characters and plot! i love alma's character and her realistic way of handling things. you're a very talented writer, and i say this because few could keep me engrossed in such an emotional charged story when the main setting thus far has been the inside of a house. i'm excited to read more and i can't wait to find out what happens.

keep writing!

ellie chapter 21 . 3/15/2009
hey, i love your story, i found it on thurs and have been steadily making my way through.

can't wait for more.

Faith Adeline chapter 21 . 3/12/2009
Great job. I liked this chapter. The little moment between them was cute and written well. Keep it up and update soon!

Nephilim Familiar chapter 21 . 3/6/2009
Can't wait for more, this is an amazing story :)

Sincerely Nephilim Familiar
Tijan chapter 1 . 3/6/2009
The wording is confusing in your third paragraph. I thought Alma had been there when her mother was mugged. The next sentence said she wasn't concerned. This gave me the initial dislike for the primary character. Just a heads up, do what you want with it.

Hannah C. Thaw chapter 21 . 3/2/2009
Sorry for not reviewing the last chapter! Fanfic wouldn't let me at first, and then I forgot. Good chapter! It is nice o get some action, so that the plot moves physically forward. I like the image of the Illias outlined by the fireworks. Where will they go next?

I was just thinking about her friends, don't they notice she is gone? That she hasn't emailed or called, just to check in?

Just a thought.
Taren Elle chapter 21 . 2/28/2009
Wow so I felt that coming...his dramatic hurt entrance. Hope he's not hurt 2 bad.
Briana Banana chapter 21 . 2/28/2009
Hello yet again...

Wow what a difference this chapter makes from the last time they were intimate. You can almost taste the love to which Illias has for her; even if he doesn't recognize it himself. So now we will get to meet the illusive Ser. Cant wait but I would have loved a little more Alma/Illias time, but at the same time I really like it. Not all in life is happiness, bunnies and rainbows. Cant wait to see what happens next...

Till next time

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