As usual, that was completely and totally AMAZING! I adore these characters, their relationship and the real sex (of course virgins mess up lol) hahaha :D

I love the tension in this story. Very well written :D

wow, your short note at the end left me excited for the rest of the chapters! illias is so intense and the bit at the end made me just FREAK OUT because ohmigosh, will they be okay?

i am, as always, quite envious of your ability to write a compelling romance.

also, sex.

haha.

Oh, sex!

...that wasn't what I had intended to write first. Ah, well.

Great chappie! This was so good! I enjoy this story so much, and you're doing such a great job with it! Keep up the good work!

I remain your faithful reader,

Serai Rhifune

update soon

cliff hanger?

great story

Legit.

Kudos for the sex scene between Illias and Alma..pretty darn hot :) I loved how it had just enough awkwardness on Almas part though. Very realistic for what she has been through at this point.

So..I'm thinking a change of scenery will be good for the story. Alma and Illias' relationship has built and transformed..and protecting Alma is no longer strickly buisness for Illias.(I would think) The way Alma views Illias will change as well..It shall be interesting to see how this next bit will play out. Well done chapter!

That was some chapter, to be honest I hadn't expected their tangle to play out the way it had, to be more specific with her on top. But I like to think of it as Illias was trying to give her a feeling of having some control over the situation, trying to make her more comfortable, is there any merit to that thought or was I just thinking to much into that? Anyways I'm glad he was so nice to her, its such a relief to have them be so good with one another. The bit with them looking for their clothes was nice, sometimes its those little moments that make the world seem brighter. Of course though I knew this nice atmosphere would come to a screeching halt. I hope Illias isn't badly injured. Good luck with the next chapter ].

My goodness. Your writing is so beautiful! This is LITERATURE.

Every one of your chapters has me at the edge of my seat; cheeks nearly glued to my computer screen, and I am damn happy with it. I love reading this story-the suspense, drama, ROMANCE-UGH! I love it! Spectacular, absolutely spectacular read!

I will read this as far as it goes, so feel free to write until you are completely and utterly spent.

*Cheers*

Hoe-ly crap! that was intense. I don't think i could imagine to be in her place. Everything going haywire just for a throne. sheesh...

I liked the part where she prayed. it was really something. ] good update. keep up the good job.

that chapter was intense and beautiful! You wrote them as feeling so connected to each other in the first half and i loved the old joke ;D The part where Illias put the headphones on her was chilling! I hope he is okay!

Uh oh... I hope he lives...

That illias is a real mystery. I wonder what his story is. He's too discreet and secretive. but i've enjoyed the story overall. Their little quips are amusing.

I can't wait for the next installment. ] keep up the great work.

Great job, I liked it. Can't wait for more, so be sure to update soon!

Faith

OMG the suspense, the next chapter...I NEED IT...lol.

Gosh i really love this chapter. This quote was so beautiful - But I want you to know – to understand – that I know exactly how you deserve to be treated, better than any other man on his planet. And I want to show you exactly what you deserve. I want to show you exactly how you should be treated.” This chapter was so beautiful as they come to an understanding.

I can't wait for more!