|Reviews for The Folly of a Monster Love|
| Courtney chapter 18 . 1/12/2009
I swear, every time I try this, it does NOT work.
*Flips the finger at FictionPress*
Anyway, let's try this AGAIN:
Bflygirl6587 aol . com
*Erase the spaces, :D
Though, I know you probably already know that. Haha.
| Courtney chapter 18 . 1/12/2009
Well sure, I'd love to see them. :)
Every time I write a story, I always like finding pictures of what I think my characters resemble. It's lame, but I think it's fun.
And, I actually have an account on here, but I never get on. -_-
But, here's my email:
I agree, this is probably my favorite chapter so far. I love how Alma used her womanly pride at the end, and pretty much told Illias off. WOOH! He deserved it, after how shitty he had been treating her.
And even though the sex wasn't all sunshine and daisies, and Alma was hurt from it, I still think she has feelings for him, as he does for her. I just think he doesn't know how to cope with it. Or, I could totally be wrong as well. Although, I hope he didn't mean all that stuff he said to her. D:
Anyway, once again, great chapter! Update soon!
Don't keep us waiting. :D
| Kar00 chapter 18 . 1/12/2009
Wow. This chapter was beautifully written! I was a bit shocked at the sex scene; I have to admit that I never saw that one coming. But I like it, and I think it suits this story. Keep writing!
| autumnsprite chapter 18 . 1/12/2009
WOW, this chapter was so emotionally charged. It had me on the edge of my seat! I loved the ending how she got all her thoughts out to him. I can't wait for more!
| Faith Adeline chapter 18 . 1/11/2009
The one thing I did not like in this chapter was how she just seemingly wrote the rape off. It really seemed like a smack in the face to all the people who have been through that, because she just forgave him or whatever. I mean, she didn't even scream or try to get away! So, I was really disappointed at that. I thought it was a weird add into the story.
That being said, I liked what she said at the end. He definitely deserved a big fuck you. More than that.
Keep it up, and I hope you have a really, really good reason for him raping her. Otherwise, it could be a bit unnecessary.
| bluetinkerbell chapter 18 . 1/11/2009
I love the angst, the drama, the terror.
I thought that Illias raped Alma, however. Wouldn't her reaction to him be a little more...well, just a little more? But that is the only question I have about the story.
But I love this. The storyline is incredibly deep, interesting, and complex. I can't wait for the story to keep on evolving :D YAY!
| xiomara209 chapter 18 . 1/11/2009
wow she told him...i feel so proud of her finally giving him a piece of her mind..
| DarkestOfNights chapter 18 . 1/11/2009
Wow that was an intense chapter, I can't believe Illias raped her! That's just horrible, I felt so sad while reading that. I am however glad that Alma told him off the way she did. I hope it opens his damn mind to how she feels about this whole thing. He really is being insensitive, bahh I could go on and on about how he totally fucked up, but I won't. Good luck with the next chapter.
| Briana Banana chapter 18 . 1/11/2009
First and foremost I would like to congratulate you in your great story. I have not left any reviews but read the story. I have read some of the reviews and I most say that the rape scene may have felt like it came from left field, but I think I get the reason that its there. One of your reviewers said that he had to do it to establish authority to her, but I believe he did it in order to establish her as a part of a scheme and not his own personal life. I think he has feelings for her but he has been alone for so long that he doesn't really know how to react. So the only reaction is to act like the demon he is.
What makes me question Almas sanity is how detached she is to what happened to her. No really question her sanity, but just question her character, self respect. Sure one can forgive what is done to us but one cant forget.
But I guess her backbone is coming out of her in the last of the chapter. What I am worried is of his own reaction it could go both ways at the moment.
Cant wait till your next update..
| charm en route chapter 18 . 1/11/2009
Question! If it wasn't Illias doing that to Alma in her dreams, then how did he get her iPod?
Hhahaha, and in chapter fifteen you wrote 'filling her lungs, and enticing her lions' ahahah, I'm not sure but I think you meant loins.
Also, in chapter eighteen it says 'she knew he his touch would be harmless.' I think that extra 'he' was unintentional, yeah?
I must say, I love Alma. I mean, you've written her with such quirks that make her seem real, fathomable. Also, throughout the entire story we know that Illias is a demon, but I guess he doesn't show his true self until now, huh?
Furtherrmoree, it's kind of funny how the entire story is built around Alma and Illias and what could be and what might be, and in one chapter it seems everything changes and crashes down.
Haahah, you're awesome. Well done.
| slowdear chapter 1 . 1/11/2009
I am surprised by what Illias had resorted to do. I do somewhat understand why he did it. I think opening up the box made him realized that his relationship with Alma isn't normal and that he needed to focus on what he had to do, which was to protect her. So he did what what he thought was best, a demon. He could had easily seduce or manipulated Alma, it would had been easier but I think he wanted to display the authority over her and make their relationship less personal.
I'm really disappointed in Alma. I know she wished she was stronger but I think she could be a little more stronger. She should had been angry, screaming and yelling when Illias forced himself on her. She should had also been really angry when he burned her things and the limited freedom she had. I'm really glad that she stood up to him at the end of the chapter. I love the big fuck you, I hope it'll get through Illias and maybe he would understand the way she feels.
I love this story a lot, I hope you update soon. I can't wait to see what will happen next.
| Stahlut chapter 18 . 1/11/2009
wow that was definitely intense, I hope you update soon.
| ssmoochic chapter 18 . 1/11/2009
that was a very intense chapter
| suoirucme chapter 18 . 1/11/2009
I'm not even gonna lie...I am kind of disappointed. Definitely not in the whole chapter cause that was really emotional and great. I am just kind of sad that after all of that sexual tension she ends up getting raped. That is just totally disappointing.
Now we need to find out why that was necessary.
Everything else though was great especially the soliloquy...my heart broke.
Keep it coming please*
| rawrr.sock.puppett chapter 18 . 1/11/2009
Uh... wow! Heh, wow! And when he raped her, why isn't she even remotely traumatized by it? Illias is acting like such a douchebag! His emotions are all up and down and all over the place! Is he PMSing? Jeez! He's pissing me off right now! :D That thing in the box was creepy weird.
I like the ending where Alma finally says something to Illias and it like a big FUCK YOU! Nice! I'm also a little ticked with Alma because she never does anything! I wanna kick her in the shins! It's understandable that Illias is all big and bad, but he threw out all her things and he raped her!
Even if it was to protect her, she didn't even do anything afterward! She needs to grow a pair! Um, that might've been out of place for what I wrote up there, but I'm thinking as I'm writing this so forgive me!
Um, this is the longest review I've ever written and it will probably be the only long I'll ever write. XD I agree with Hannah C. Thaw! He can't go back to being a good guy, but was he ever? :D
Yeah, so don't hate me, 'cuz I don't mean to sound harsh, 'cuz I don't think I am, but if I sound like that, totally sorry!
I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep it up!