Reviews for The Folly of a Monster Love
Aistaraina chapter 18 . 1/11/2009
Yay! We found out what was in the box. Ilias is starting seem even more of a jerk. I feel sorry for Alma that she has to stay in the same house as him.
KiraLove chapter 18 . 1/11/2009
Why did he have to do that? That's horrid! Poor Alma... Yet somehow i feel sorry for him too... Something is off. I can't wait to see what happens next.

-Kira Love
Me chapter 18 . 1/11/2009
Stories with rape annoy me. I really liked this story and will continue to read it but I hate it when authors add rape into their story. The way it was going, he could have easily gotten her to have sex with him willingly and then for drama he could be a d*ck afterwards or something. I also don't like it when the girl forgives the guy that raped her. Disgusting. Seriously.
Sabreal chapter 18 . 1/11/2009
loved this chapter and the sheer length of it! Illias is a cracking awesome name!

I kind of see where Alma's coming from- but it's so frustrating when she cries!

But i guess it's just a human reaction to the turmoil around her and without those life is meaningless.

update asap!


Haley Hardcore chapter 18 . 1/11/2009
great chapter and wow lol didnt expect the whole rape scene and the stuff afterward and she finally confronted him about evrything at the end cant wait till the next chapter and see what he has 2 say
silver-ether chapter 18 . 1/11/2009
Okay, I must say... I LOVE THIS STORY!

I just found it and have read all 18 chapters in one go - because I had no choice. I love it! Your characters are very well written and your description is excellent. You convey their emotions so well it feels like I'm in the room with them as it happens. And now that I'm addicted, it's all I can do to sit and wait for the next chapter!

Waiting as patiently as I can...

Libby24 chapter 18 . 1/11/2009
I have to agree with Hannah C. Thaw about this chapter. Your writing is excellent but I can't believe Alma just sat there when Illias raped her and then she keeps going back to him and talking to him as if none of it happened. This chapter was very emotionally intense but I'm not sure how I felt about it overall.
Hannah C. Thaw chapter 18 . 1/11/2009
This was very very very frustrating to read. You said he feels these emotions for a specific reason? I can't imagine why. I am frustrated with Alma. She never did react to him throwing out her things or raping her. She is just sitting back and taking it all. I wish she was stronger. How can she get back in bed with him? She is one of the abused spouses that refuses to leave the abuser. I feel like she is a masochist. She certainly seems to enjoy being humiliated and hurt.

Ilias. Im sorry, I don't know what you are going to do to "redeem" him. But rape is crossing a line. He can't go back to being a good guy.

I am sorry if this harsh/mean but this chapter left me not is a good mood.
Stahlut chapter 17 . 1/10/2009
I loved it, I don't even think I have words to describe how much I loved it, can't wait to read more.
buzzgirl37 chapter 17 . 1/6/2009
It suddenly came to me in the middle of class today that I hadn't reviewed so I wrote it on my hand and came home and reread it and here I am to annoy you once more...:D

First things first...arghh I knew it was all gonna crumble around them just as things were beginning to spice up in the apartment...damnation! (I've always wanted to say/write that) Stupid Ser destroying everything...Grr. Thugh of course I am soo very intruiged by what's in that box...a lot of the stories I'm reading lately seem to have boxes in them...and they never tell you what's in it. Well I guess you kind of did "The beginning of the end" for Alma...but that soo doesn't yeh as you can see I can't wait for the next chapter :D

Ooh GO Illias! Illias and Alma up a tree... But ahh what's wrong with Alma..? I think she should tell him she's a virgin..does he already know? And YES the condoms made a nice enterance, I so didn't think it would happen like that. He'd have probably never even known about them if she hadn't have said...but yay for Alma and her big mouth.

And Illias is jealous of Warren...still. Idiot man..demon..thing. But it's so a very masculine way of course :D

Anyways I'm rambling so I'm gonna stop. Can't wait for the next chapter :D!
Faith Adeline chapter 17 . 1/5/2009
Good job, I liked it. I want to know what's in the box. XD. ahhaha. Keep it up and update soon!

Kar00 chapter 17 . 1/4/2009
OMG THEY WERE-SO CLOSE- WHY-JEEZ-DAMNIT. So much sexual frustration right now. Please update soon!
Taren Elle chapter 17 . 1/2/2009
Wow so I really love this fic...It's "Gettin' Juicy" lol, and now a challenge from Ser...Can't wait to see what happenes in the next chapter.
monichi chapter 17 . 12/31/2008

I read all seventeen chapters in one go, and i must say, you write wonderfully (:

The characters are all really engaging and leave you wanting more.

Can't wait till the next update comes out!
autumnsprite chapter 17 . 12/31/2008
Happy New Year! Yay for an awesome chapter as a new years pressie! I loved how the start of the chapter was just them two and then it ended with a reminder of Ser. dun dun dun. I can't wait for more! (as always hehe)
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