Reviews for The Folly of a Monster Love
tobslytobby chapter 17 . 12/30/2008
i am really excited for the next chapter, the suspense is killing me! this story gets more interesting every chapter, i love it. update soon.
Courtney chapter 17 . 12/30/2008
You're very welcome. I just think Ian is a sexy hunk. And, he reminded me a little of Illias. But, I had no idea on your take of how Illias should look, so I wasn't quite sure what you'd think. But, you should totally make a character profile, and find some pictures of what your characters resemble. :D

So, has Alma admitted to herself that she's in love with him? I mean, come on, I think it's obvious. Though, whether or not Illias feels the same way, I don't know. He changes moods so quickly, it's hard to tell what he's thinking. But altogether this was a great chapter, and I can't wait for you to update. I'm excited to see how Illias is going to deal with the 'challenge'.

Update soon! And thanks for replying! :D
Written chapter 17 . 12/30/2008
oh my gosh, they are so cute. their interactions were really interesting in this chapter, I'd have to say. the BOX though... well done with keeping us on our toes!
Hannah C. Thaw chapter 17 . 12/30/2008
In the box is her Dad's head, isn't it? It is a body part of someone she cares about. I am sure of that much. When they were getting hot and heavy, why did she freeze? I wish she would stop with the mood swings. But I understand where they come from. Although you talked about love. How can she be in love? So far she lusts after him and trusts him. But he doesn't make her happy.

Just food for thought. Good chapter!
suoirucme chapter 17 . 12/30/2008
Ah...too many interruptions.


Illias needs to realize that she's embarrassed and say something to reassure her, then maybe she'll be a little less self-conscious.

I really did like the display of emotion and their interaction in this was so relaxed (besides the intensity of their desire).

I am officially waiting for the breakthrough now.

rawrr.sock.puppett chapter 17 . 12/30/2008

The plot thickens! :D

Can't wait for the next chapter!
Queen Kat Food chapter 17 . 12/30/2008
I finally caught up. Great story, it's still going wonderfully. Illias may need to consider taking something for those mood swings. Love the interaction between him and Alma though, it's comfortable and awkward all at the same time. Well I'll leave a longer review next time. Keep up the good work!
DaniD3 chapter 17 . 12/30/2008
Well..the box is more than a little ominous. I mean..what the heck is in it? I KNOW I wouldn't be able to not look after he said something like that. lol

The sexual tension between Illian and Alma is becoming unbelievable..even with the little interludes. Great update!
Haley Hardcore chapter 17 . 12/30/2008
dude they were so close and creepy box yo cant wait till the next chapter
Aistaraina chapter 1 . 12/30/2008
Thank you for updating. You just made my day. I found it funny how nonchalant Ilias was after the whole thing in the last chapter. I wonder what's in the box? I guess you'll let us know sooner or later.
ssmoochic chapter 17 . 12/30/2008
omg, what the hell is in that box. and what the hell is wrong with alma...tell that logic of hers to go take a hike.
DarkestOfNights chapter 17 . 12/30/2008
It figures that the entire chapter would be filled with even more sexual tension than the last, that they were actually about to do it and something interrupts it. Its frustrating really, there I was grinning like a happy fool that he was being so sexual with her, his words, his actions. I was thinking yes finally, but nope you had to be EVIL. And now I'm thinking thing's wont be as boring for Alma with the arrival of this challenge in a box. I want to know what's in the box, I assume it was a human, someone they may know? Alright I'll stop here before I start to ramble on, Happy Holidays to you if you celebrated as well and just in case you don't update by then Happy New Year ] and good luck with the next chapter.
Jessiclam chapter 1 . 12/19/2008
its awesome. love the story, can't wait for the next chapter :)
DaniD3 chapter 16 . 12/18/2008
wow ...I'm truly loving this story. Illias is such an odd mixture of hunk and asshole. I love it. lol

I'm getting the feeling that there is a lot that he is not telling Alma. Can't wait to read more!
Aistaraina chapter 16 . 12/15/2008
It's been a long time since I've found a good story and just my luck I found one last night. This is the one I found. I enjoy the conversations between Alma and Illias. I think you're doing a great job with giving us only enough to keep us wanting more. Keep up the good job and you'll see me reviewing next chapter.
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