Reviews for The Folly of a Monster Love
Libby24 chapter 16 . 12/13/2008
This story is so AMAZING! I can't believe you only have 142 reviews, you deserve many more. I'm so into the characters and the plotline is great as are your descriptions. PLEASE update this story asap I can't wait to read more! Thanks for posting it and keep up the great work! Hope you're having a great weekend.

-Libby :)
xiomara209 chapter 16 . 12/13/2008
love the story..cant wait for more..
xiomara209 chapter 1 . 12/11/2008
love the story..
Courtney chapter 1 . 12/9/2008
I think I'll cry if this link does not work, because this is the third review I've sent for this ONE

chapter! -_-

photobucket CRTNY

Just erase the spaces, maybe that'll work, but copy and paste that link!
Faith Adeline chapter 16 . 12/9/2008
Great chapter with a wonderfully hot ending :) Good work! Keep it up and update soon!

Courtney chapter 16 . 12/8/2008
Well dang, I don't think that link I gave you in my last review works, so try this one:


I REALLY want you to see the pictures of this guy. *Fan Squeal*

Anyway, once again, great chapter, and update soon! :)
Courtney chapter 16 . 12/8/2008
Okay, so I had this HUGE review I wrote you right? Well, I was just about to submit it, and then BOOM, my computer froze. I felt like crying I was so mad. Anyway, I'll just state what I wrote in the other one. So, basically, I believe that Alma and Illias wont be able to hold off for much longer. They have a LOT of sexual chemistry, and poor Alma is frustrated. That little stunt at the end of the chapter was steamy! Woh! And, I have a theory that the reason why her, uhm, libido is so wild right now is because she has Illias's blood in her. And I have a question for you. Are they going to fall in love? Because there is that whole, he's a demon thing. I mean, he doesn't age right? So he'd basically watch her grow old and die. Oh God, you have to find a way for them to be together! D:

Sorry, this is turning out longer than I expected but before I go, I wanna give you this link:


that's basically what I picture Illias to look in my minds eye. I don't know what you see him as, but I think this guy has this certain sex appeal to him, not to mention the fact that he is INCREDIBLY sexy. I want his babies! He has pretty feet too. And there's this one picture where he's laying in a bed with a bottle in his hand, and I just think it screams "Illias!", haha. I think he could pull off a demon. Anyway, I enjoyed this chapter, and update soon!
ssmoochic chapter 16 . 12/8/2008
wow... illias can be very seductive when he wants to be
Strawberriesandcream chapter 12 . 12/8/2008
I would just like to say that the last chapter made me fangirl squeal. A lot. So good! So mysterious... where does he go all the time? And whats with all the meat? He doesn't need to eat vegetables?
rawrr.sock.puppett chapter 16 . 12/8/2008
WOWOWOW! And I'm going to another WOW for some oomph! :D I started reading this before and then I stopped and then I read from 6 to 16 in like two to three hours... I don't know about you, but I'm a slow reader... or maybe that's not slow and it's just me...

XD I loved this chapter! *Fans self* Just the right amount of smut! I actually thought they were gonna go all the way. I jumped a couple sentences, and had to read it like twice and it was just as great the second time!

Alma finally got what she wanted! Well, almost! But still! It's pretty close!

I cannot wait for the next chapter!
buzzgirl37 chapter 16 . 12/8/2008
OMG I LOVE YOU! :) See declarations of love, aren't you lucky :)

Well I love you so long as that was really Illias...but I don't think you can be cruel enough not to let it be, well I hope not anyway...please let it have actually been Illias and not some when shape shifting illusion demon thing! I'm getting way too worked up about this...I'm growing more and more obsessed :)

And more Illias scantly clothed doing sexy things yay...she'll just have to make sure she ways some of his musky clothes in the next chapter since he never went shopping for her...won't that be a big big shame...:D

I can't wait for him to see the condoms...only good things can come of them...i hope. See look how unsure you've made me with the Ser/Illias thing earlier on...damn your great authorness!

Anyway LOVED this chapter, as well as yourself.

And I can't believe the spider made you more uncomfortable that the breeding/sex scene. Although that spider might still be around is making me a little uncomfortable. Illias could show his great manliness and kill it for her :) Or it could be some evil thing it did bite her essentially getting more blood...I'm paranoid of spiders. Really can't stand them even the tiny little ones, they make me tense up if I see one.

Anyways can't wait for the next chapter! :)
addicted2cocoa chapter 16 . 12/8/2008
I haven't read this story in a while, and I'm not sure whether I've reviewed in the past, but I'm really enjoying reading this story. I like the mixture of supernatural and romance, I think you've handled the two really well and it's a given that I liked the development between Illias and Alma ;P

Hannah C. Thaw chapter 16 . 12/8/2008
zomg. love love love.

Illias! You naughty boy! I adored the final line. A lot.

And the sex scene made me blush. I thought you should know. Oh Illias. I love you.

Good job! I did not expect this. Will they be awkward tomorrow? I hope not!
Written chapter 16 . 12/7/2008
haha, okay, my first thought during that scene was "IS IT REALLY HIM THIS TIME?"

I'm just going to take this in good faith and assume it is him. in which case, their relationship is so cute/messed up. I love them.

I also love their silly bickering throughout. so cute! I wonder how she'll act around him in the morning?

and on an unrelated but-sort-of-not note, my apartment is like 65 degrees, which is five degrees to cold for me.
Airror chapter 16 . 12/7/2008
Thank you for updating, I loved this chapter. Great job on the almost-sex scene. I think it's good that you've held off on the sex. It doesn't seem like the right time yet, although I don't know when the right time would be.

Keep up the great work, I can't wait to read about what happens next with Illias and Alma.
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