Reviews for The Folly of a Monster Love
Haley Hardcore chapter 16 . 12/7/2008
awesome story love it cant wait till the next chapter
PassionateKisses chapter 16 . 12/7/2008
I just wanted to say that this story is amazing and I am excited about what could possibly happen next. Just through this story I can see that you are an amazing writer and I can't wait to see what you do with the rest of this story!

-anxiously waiting for the next post...
Stahlut chapter 16 . 12/7/2008
wow that was a really cool chapter, I cannot wait to read more.
DarkestOfNights chapter 16 . 12/7/2008
This chapter was greatly enjoyed. I had thought that they would completely 'do it' but I think this way is better. I'm sure she will no doubt feel extremely shy and embarrassed in the morning and when she see's him. That should make for an interesting chapter. But I have this feeling that Illias being the way he is will just act as if nothing really happened. I wish she would just grab him, kiss him and tell him that she wants him, I'd like to know how Illias would react to such a thing. I await the next chapter as patiently as I can, good luck with writing it out ].
autumnsprite chapter 16 . 12/7/2008
haha that was hot! His last words were pretty cheeky ;D It was an awesome chapter! She whooped his arse at Gin!
Kar00 chapter 16 . 12/7/2008
omg YES. Finally, all that tension.. is now released.

Now Illias just needs to replace his finger with another part of his anatomy..._ very, very soon. It's not healthy to keep a girl wanting. XD
layne chapter 16 . 12/6/2008
how very kinky haha
phreespirit316 chapter 16 . 12/6/2008
Hello! I'm sorry for not reviewing for a long while. Anywho, Alma finally got her wish! Bedding... er.. almost anyway... the ever sexy Illias. And I must say that I agree with the statement "I liked you better when you did your puzzles. It doesn't fry like these machines do.", machines are such a great invention, no? Hehe... Anywho... it seems so quiet..I get the feeling a demon is going to pop up soon. Hmm.

Anywho, I hope to see more chapters soon!
Faith Adeline chapter 15 . 12/5/2008
Great chapter, I loved it. It sucks he had to burn everything. I'd go postal, lol. Keep it up and update soon!

Kar00 chapter 15 . 11/29/2008
Damn Illias is so hot. Even his name sounds like a Greed god! I hopeAlma's desires will be.. "satisfied" soon ahem. Keep writing more and more! : )
CharnaToivonen chapter 11 . 11/29/2008
I love this story so far! I'm writing my own demon and human love story, too. Got inspired by this one. :) But don't worry, it won't be a rip-off of your story, but probably a rip-off of Silent Hill. :P

Ahem... anyways. I see no problem with your writing. I absolutely love that the grammar is flawless (to me, but I'm not that great at spotting grammar errors). I guess I'm just a freak for good grammar in stories. But the characters I'm even more fond of. Keep writing, and hopefully I'll catch up to the latest chapter! XD

I'd also love it if you critiqued my own story (when I'm actually allowed to upload it up here, stupid new-users-can't-upload-a-story-unless-their-account-is-two-days-old thing!)

Anyhow, enough of my blabbering. What I'm trying to say is... keep writing! D
Hannah C. Thaw chapter 15 . 11/28/2008
Oh my goodness oh my goodness. I would kill Illias. I don't care how hot he is and his mad supernatural powers. He would die.

Actually it would have been nice to see Alma be a little more angry at him, hold a little more of a grudge.

Good chapter though, I liked the length. Sorry it took me so long to review, I have been busy.

I noticed one thing in this chapter- it felt a lot like Twilight. Suernatural, insanely hot guy who makes that girl unable to think with his good looks and is over protective.

Oh and what was with that final sleeping position? Very random. It doesn't seem comfortable, but I trust you.

Keep writing!
Airror chapter 15 . 11/27/2008
I love your story, it makes me giggle a lot (and I'm not much of a giggler). I think Alma is cute and Illias is hot, and they're both so funny. I'm really enjoying reading your story, keep up the great work.
Courtney chapter 15 . 11/26/2008
So, I'm in love with you story so far. (: You need to update soon dearie. And, Alma and Illias need to hurry up and shag mann. Sorry, just had to say it. But, anyway, I love your writing, so keep up the good work. It's not everyday that I actually find a good supernatural fic, with a good dose of romance and sexual tension in it. :D

But, that's always the best kind. ;)
autumnsprite chapter 15 . 11/22/2008
wow i really loved this chapter how they were just together. Poor Alma,though i envy her new sleeping arrangements, she doesn't stand a chance hehe. I can't wait for more!
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