oh! this is a good story!

yay i'm glad u updated! i really do love this story. i can't wait for the next chapter.

wow, insanely long chapter...it was great. i can't believe all it took to alma in his bed was a spider!

omg this has been my FAVORITE chapter so far! i LOVE this story! please Please PLEASE post the next chapter SOON!

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Pretty amazing if I do say so myself...Keep it up ]

This chapter was awesome. And when he threw all her stuff in the fire, I don't think there is anyone who can't find some sympathy there. It would be horrid! can't wait for you to update.

I just stumbled across your story and had to comment. I can't wait to read the next chapter!

You were right I loved it, completely and utterly. And was amazingly long and went on forever so I love you/it (it being the story not you, though you probably already knew that...I was clarifying..:)) even more!

I could tell I was gonna love it when I read the first few lines, any in depth description of Illias is welcomed...actually it's ordered! We need loads of them especially that one near the ened :D Wow I sound pervy...oh well it's a lil true.

I loved this one made me laugh, though I hold it completely against you if anyone asks me why I was basically cackling in hysterics at my laptop.

Lots and lots of Illias for 2 months (well probs sooner cus they're gonna be found :( It's inevitable for the plot I guess but still :( ).

Urgh Warren, not sure what it is about him but he made my face fall when he came into it. Though he and Alma needed clarity and we needed that possessiveness of Illias.

He better be letting her wear lots and lots of his (musky scented) clothes to make up for the fact that he burnt hers.

I had one of those half smirks on through the half-breed/Illias' sex life bit, liked it, though was trying not to go red. I feel the embarassment like I'm there...is that odd?

I get what you meant about the last chapter, I have to unfortunately agree the un-Illias-ness was necessary, at least we got some funny stories to make up for it.

Anyway I LOVE YOU. Do you get that often from strangers...? I guess you might :) Can't wait for the next chapter! More Illias :D

oh my goodness, they are adorable.

the part where she lost her mother's picture in the trash can fire was very heart wrenching to be honest. I wish she could have kept it :( though I guess thats just the way life is.

illias is pretty neat... how does one live without a microwave haha. he must be able to cook -real- food. weird.

I love her personality. like she freaks out about the spider haha. I would too, seriously.

okay, this update was great. LOVE the two of them together. I had something else I was going to mention, but now I can't remember it... urgh.

oh yeah, the scene with warren. I feel the sake way about this other guy now and I dont know what to do with him. sigh.

anyway, I've got to jet, because if I dont hand in my rent downstairs before the office closes, I'll get evicted. I KNOW. I procrastinated on handing it in for no reason. :(

I think I would have trashed his house if he burned all my stuff, I feel so bad for her. He should have told her what he was planing to do, then she might have been able to save a few prized possessions, such as the picture of her mother, and all those little special things. Though I'm a little mad about all her stuff being burned, I'm glad you finished the chapter the way you did. I can't imagine how she feels laying with him in bed like that. I wonder if anything naughty will happen ]. Anyways good luck with the next chapter.

i just found this story and i'm so glad i did, i love it! i love all the characters, especially alma's roomates, their hilarious. and illias isn't too shabby either. (i want him) anyway update soon!

agh, I love those girls! haha. they are so funny. annoying but endearing at the same time, you know? reminds me a lot of some of my friends. and I think this chapter also highlights that our heroine is growing... you know? no longer quite so innocent. which is actually really interesting!

this chapter was very relaxing and normal seeming, but I'm guessing things will get weird from here on out, right?

enjoyed seeing illias at the end. they are so cute together, and I can't wait to see the two of them in the next chapter :)

this review is a tad short, because I'm really not feeling well :( but thank you for giving me a nice distraction on my sick day.

yay! Illias is back in the scene! i can't wait for more! haha as always

Good job, I liked it. Keep it up and update soon.

Faith

i did enjoy, it was a needed goodbye to her roommates. i think the fact ser got to her first makes the story tons more interesting.