I'm glad you updated, I was wondering what happened. And I feel as if this chapter is the calm before the storm type of thing, since things were very normal and un-life threatening. Wellp good luck with the next chapter ].

That was really good. Her fredns are so funny, they crack me up. and I can't wait until you update.

Yay update. Loved it, though not muxh Illias, but we'll be getting him non stop soon :)!

I loved the fact that for hurting Alma she was going to, not attack him or castrate him but rape him. Kinda lets my mind wonder to the hotness of Illias, which isn't good cus he's a character...but still yum.

Nice background to their friendship it was so sweet...well as sweet as you can get with tequila, marijuana and condoms. Which of course it very sweet :)

Can't wait for the next chapter!

I've been checking everyday for the past 2 weeks

I feel like a junkie who just had a fix...lol

Lovely chapter to a Wonderful story ]

wait so why don't the monsters just get three random people off the street if they need humans? i mean is there anything really special about alma? or do they need specific people? and why did illias make her have that dream in the beginning?

wow i have a lot of question... but anyway i'm liking it, it just got more intresting now.

How about an "ARGGH" does that mount the same happiness as an ew or creepy?

I spent most of that chapter mumbling to myself about how unfair that fact was...why couldn't it have been him? Why? Is this to annoy the hell outta of us and make us comment more and keep reading. Because it's working. You are truely conceited lol

Anyway...at least the moving in happens soon. Then we can all be content. :( Ser got further with her than Illias Urgh :(

On a nice note I like the fact that she's his "First" It's lovely :D and that she knew he was lying when he said that no one had failed.

Can't wait for the next chapter...as always

I liked this chapter, and the one before. Can't wait for more. Keep it up and update soon!

Faith

That was really good, I got caught up and wanted more lol. I really hope that you update soon, oh and your comment at the end made me laugh, just thought I would tell you. Can't wait for more.

uh oh! Ser better not get Alma, or else im gonna be mad! ;) haha i LOVE this story! One of the best and most attention-capturing ones i've read! I can't wait to find out what happens next! Post the next chapter SOON, please! :)

hey you! haha. I am so glad you updated. first of all. because, seriously, I love this story. YAY.

okay, NOW I'M READING.

[“I can’t understand you when you’re hyperventilating.”]

hahaha. oh dear. I would be doing the same thing. especially if I had to TELL someone about it. how awkward.

EW, IT WAS SER? creepy. seriously, creepy.

SER TOUCHED HER INAPPROPRIATELY...

[“He isn’t supposed to make contact with humans; he proving that he doesn’t need to follow the rules while holding the throne because no one – not even the whole of the fourth or fifth realm – is capable of stopping him.”]

first of all, that is majorly heeby. secondly, maybe an "is" after the word "he"?

[despair filled her like molasses]

delicious! haha.

I dont know, I'm just really hungry for breakfast, okay?

oh my goodness, I am having the same index card issue. that entire part made me laugh. UGH COLLEGE. IT SUCKS SOMETIMES.

I like the part where she's thinking about how she cant tell anyone about how kickass awesome she is being lately. that's totally how I would feel, too!

also... living with illias... hmm...

haha. re: your author note; I can only HOPE that you are stalking me. and leaving me gooey cookies.

Okay, I DO need to eat breakfast now. ta!

So that dark and disturbing shadow outside my window was you? Well, I guess since you are giving me one fat, gooey cookie I won't call the cops. But next time, only a cookie won't work! I like brownies too :)

Another great chapter. I can't wait until more Illias time comes in the next one. He's as dreamy as one fat gooey cookie. Maybe even twenty five :)

not a bad chapter. seems like the story's slowing down a bit-is this intentional?

So Ser molested her? How awkward.

But does this mean she is still turned on by Illias, or did that sort of make it null and void? And does this mean if she meets Ser she it going to have an immediate sexual rush do to his sex dream shenanigans?

ew

This was really good, I absolutley love this story. And I really can't wait for and update. Oh and I really was not expecting that last bit, I was like wait what?. How exciting! brilliant job!