:O! what? I'm so confused...it wasn't him? Neughr -(i'm not sure how to spell the noise i just made)

Bu-Bu-But Argh... what?

Okay so need the next chapter!

Oh.. shit. That wasn't nice news.

...Woah. I think... I do /believe/ that the last sentence made my stomach drop.

Just -thud-.

Or maybe -splurk-.

...More like -erupp-.

...Or something similiar.

...Or entirely different.

Even though I feel I shouldn't be saying this again, but at the same time I can't deny the necessity of stating how wonderful this chapter was. Just like all the others before it, and those to (hopefully) come after it. I am in awe of your skillz.

-bows repeatedly-

Oh great one, I will forever do as you, or Simon, commands.

Anxiously awaiting your next chapter,

~TMP.

whoa! i did NOT see that coming! great twist in the end of the chapter! can't wait to read more!

im in love with this story.

you're amazing, its amazing.

bah.

just write more really really soon please :)

YO. okay, so my first thought was HEEBY.

which. is my way of saying EW CREEPY.

but my second thought was WELL AT LEAST HE DIDN'T MOLEST HER BEFORE THEY KNEW EACH OTHER.

It was a weird thought to have but I mean, if my friend molested me when he was still a creepy stalker to me, things would be awkward.

but the fact that it's someone else makes it SO CREEPY.

I dont know if that makes any sense. make of that what you will.

So anyway, I'm definitely going to have to do some re reading to see who is who and when she met illias exactly. I mean, it kind of changes things, doesn't it? it needs to be said that big dark reflective sunglasses kind of make people look evil. ESPECIALLY COPS. have you ever seen cool hand luke? whenever I see a cop wearing those kinds of sunglasses, I freak out scared.

I get off topic sometimes...

I love illias a lot. I forgot how fun it was to read a well written romancey romance. I dont know if that makes any sense. I mean, the romances I read are well written, but they arent always like you know, that INTENSE on the romantic front, if that makes sense. like I already said, I myself forget to write in the romance. but despite what you said, I think you do a good job balancing things. I dont think I'd be able to read a story that wasn't interesting in other ways. by other ways, I mean that there's a good dose of supernatural THRILLER to things that keeps me on my toes. I am really not able to convey my thoughts very well right now because I'm really sleepy, but do you know what I mean?

anyway.

also, it doesn't need to be said again, but man, I love that name. even though my cousin is named it, if I ever have a son... he might be an illias. not enough people in this world have that name, yanno?

wow, this review is getting super drifty.

loved the girl talk in this chapter. thought that was kind of very familiar. my friends always poke fun at me about my love life because I'm the most innocent of the lot. bah.

oh so uh, ps, thank you for your review on my story. but seriously, don't bother reading my crap! its a little embarrassing.

all right. I havent said anything useful, but I'm kind of falling asleep at the keyboard, so it's time for me to go.

I really wish there was another chapter to read, ps. PLEASE UPDATE SOON. haha. I know, I know, you JUST updated. what can I say, I'm impatient.

AH! i HATE cliff hangers! But GREAT chapter! i cant wait to find out what happens next! update SOON! :)

O_o wow! Now I'm literally on the edge of my seat and dieing for the next update. I'm sure that she will no doubt freak out and something crazy will happen. Please update as soon as you can.

Uh oh. Why violated Alma then? Ew. That's kind of creepy.

I love supernatural stories but they are often poorly written. Now this is one that is well written and has extremely interesting 't wait to read more.

poor warren! I mean, he's a tard, but still.

okay, I am so biased towards illias right now, its not even funny.

great story and all that junk. you have a good handle on how to write, and that makes me devolve into a teenaged girl being all like OH LORD I CANT WAIT TILL THEY MAKE OUT OR CONFESS TRUEE LOVEE.

you didnt hear it from me.

why hello! I feel kind of weird. I havent really read romance in a long time. I write in the romance genre but usually forget to stick it in...

SIGH. ILLIAS.

:( AW THE ANGST. IT EATS ME UP.

I hope they make up soon... wink.

olive garden and guitar hero? you just keep making me review!

okay, so I dont know what I want to happen between her and warren vs her and Illias. I mean, Warren is safe. he'll remain even after august, right? so...

hah. I love her friends. I cant wait to see what happens next! I hope he doesnt turn out to break her heart though. that would be sad.

not that she's in love or anything.