Reviews for The Folly of a Monster Love
Written chapter 5 . 10/8/2008
the promise of tears and snot of happiness makes me want to leave a review. ... haha.

okay, first of all, great story. I think that's really all I have to say. I mean, Illias is one of my favorite names, did you know that? I named my baby cousin that fairly recently. I'm not sure why I like it so much. but yes, good name.

I loved the intrigue that built up to this chapter where he revealed what he was as well. I think that was done fairly well. you didn't do much infodumping, which was good.

and normally, I HATE demon/werewolf/vampire type stories... but this is one of those exceptions!

keep up the good work.
Twitdit chapter 11 . 10/4/2008
i have to say, Warren was REALLY getting on my nerves! THANK GOODNESS he's gone! haha GREAT chapter! Please update SOON! :)
Hughe Jass chapter 6 . 10/4/2008
I'm still reading it, I've just been very busy lately. The story is shaping up well, we're starting to find out more about the world you made up for your characters, thats good.
alias h. anonymous chapter 10 . 10/3/2008
this is RUBY, btw! hehe, I sneaky...
alias h. anonymous chapter 11 . 10/3/2008
This is my favorite chapter! I just love illias in this chapter, he is so hot! Warren got owned! and Alma being embarrassed by all the things Illias was telling he was SO funny (And he was hot during those parts too.) And I liked it when he played footsie with her, that was so cute XD I cant wait for her to move with him, god i cant wait!

buzzgirl37 chapter 11 . 10/2/2008
She's going to be living at his...*insert over excited girly squeals here* :D:D

Although hopefully it'll be a little...cleaner than last time.

Loved this chapter, especially all the embarassing Alma and getting Warren out the way. (Loved the punch from the last chapter by the way)

Can't wait for the next chapter!
autumnnsprite chapter 11 . 10/2/2008
haha shut down for warren! hhaha, gosh illis is so dreamy! I can't wait for more!
Faith Adeline chapter 11 . 10/2/2008
Very good, although I can't imagine a big bad demon playing footsie. lol. That was pretty hilarious. Keep it up!

The Morbid Prince chapter 11 . 10/1/2008

-Ehem- I mean, I'm really glad that I put off studying for my Japanese and writing my English paper to read this. Ahh~ as amazing as always. Like a piece of freshly baked pumpkin pie, still warm, covered with a dollup of cool whip. M delicious~

I hate to cut this review short, but as I put off my academics to read, I must now hurry and get everything finished so that I still have time to sleep.

...But then again, who needs sleep?


This chapter was a total delight, and the idea of Illias and Alma playing footsie was just too much. I can't wait to read what happens next, so I will anxiously await your next update~ ...and maybe write a little in the mean time... ;D

As always, take care.

chibichan366 chapter 11 . 10/1/2008
all of a sudden, i'm kinda suspicious of illias now. he seems too good to be true...but still, great chapter nonetheless
Queen Kat Food chapter 11 . 10/1/2008
Another great chapter, I was super excited by the early post…yay!

Favorite line (sentence/phrase): his gaze upon her face was like that of a stabbing knife that drilled into the very depths of her modesty, forcing her eyes to the ground.

Again I just loved the poetic feel behind it…it was utterly piercing, plus I mean that whole scene was pretty funny. Alma’s discomfort humored me.

Illias seemed a lot more direct this chapter, and suggestive at the same time—he was direct with his suggestiveness. Of course that makes sense. He also seems more suave, and I’m not sure if I like it…might take some getting used to.

So the whole library scene sent me into a mini panic, for some reason I couldn’t shake the thought that the Illias there was an impostor…probably should keep the paranoia in check.

And that last line? Creepy? A little bit. I mean is he insinuating that he is evil…or maybe just quasi evil, I could handle quasi evil.

Ugh. Warren, I could just spit in his face. But I did like the transition from the loathe-ful Warren to the charming Illias, made me like Illias a lot more...if that is even possible.

And now for the not fun part…typos, not that I have anything against the typos if it means quicker updates, anything for quicker updates.

please, don’t it personally, Warren.

unbelieving she thought she had found something special in Warren

was the crutch of her panties.

pajama pants twists halfway around her waist

He quirked an playful brow at her.

ever few minutes

Alright the Grammar Slammer (I spend a lot of time with little kids) in me has been sated. Keep up the good work, I am eagerly awaiting the next one, and maybe I’ll think about shorter reviews…this thing is monstrous.
Faith Adeline chapter 10 . 10/1/2008
I love this story. Great job so far! I love Illias. Rawr. Haha. Keep it up and update soon!

The Morbid Prince chapter 10 . 9/30/2008

I'm so embarrassed and flattered that I got my own review-response, I don't know what to say! Other than well... asfagehigsjfio! ...Whatever that means! (Something along the lines of I-don't-know-what-to-say-so-I'll-put-a-cat-on-the-keyboard-and-see-what-happens.)

However, as an fellow, though less talented, author, and as a reader, your work and enthusiasm for it (as well as for the reviews that come with it), I would like you to know that you have inspired me to once again pick up the pen- or rather, plug in the good ol' tablet, and start writing.

I won't ask you to read my work, because /I/ know that if /I/ was asked to read the trainwrecks that I produce, I'd probably be traumatized, and if your traumatized then the glory that is Follies might be a casualty. ...AND THAT CANNOT BE ALLOWED!

Now that I've officially run myself in a circle and am subsequently confused, I will bid you good night.

...Or rather, good morning.

Take care!
Regin chapter 10 . 9/29/2008
I Like, I Lust, I Love!Please Update Soon!
lurker 101 chapter 10 . 9/28/2008
yay, two chapters! very glad to see warren got punched in the face, that was awesome. and it was great that u got alma in on the action killing the demon. hope to read more in the near future!
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