Reviews for The King
Icyfire4w5 chapter 1 . 1/2/2009
You have condensed the Gospels into this lovely poem, excellent!
Angelic Hellraiser chapter 1 . 8/28/2008
I've been asking that question for a long time.

I feel unworthy a lot, haha.

Once again, the flow was nice.
May Elizabeth chapter 1 . 8/27/2008
Good work. a spelling mistake "angle" is "angel". Just wanted to point that out. Keep up the good work :D
When Twilight Fades chapter 1 . 8/24/2008
I like the ending, it's so humbled and has an almost quiet voice to it. :) Normally I don't like religious poetry, but this is just... on-the-surface enough, you know? It isn't vague, but it doesn't completely delve into the more depressing depths. Good job!

Twilight Fades.:
mylittlefirefly chapter 1 . 8/23/2008
This poem is kinda sad..especially the last line (that's my fav line, too! :D), since it really gets you thinking. I enjoyed reading this very much. The simplicity to this poem was nice and the flow was great. :) The only thing is angles should be spelt "angels" but that was probably just your word messing up on ya so it's okay. (lol, when I was younger I used to spell angels like angles..thought it was right and looked better xD) Anyways keep writing! -mitsuke :)