|Reviews for Late Summer|
| Decoris Verbum chapter 1 . 9/1/2008
You hit the nail on the head. Like always.
| Eirien chapter 1 . 8/29/2008
Truly beautiful, i like this better than your German poem about summer. You really create a tangible atmosphere in this one, especially with all the adjectives and colours you use and how you adress the different senses.
| Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 8/22/2008
Sehr schön, ich setz mich zu dir in den Garten (Balkon, Terrasse, wo auch immer)
| Colin Joseph chapter 1 . 8/21/2008
There's sun, scent, radio, birds, but nothing's happening.
Would it not be better to have something happening?
Only a thought. There's nothing wrong with it, necessarily, but it isn't very interesting, because N H.
(You may not want anything to happen, and if so, that's fine too. It's your scene.)
| When Twilight Fades chapter 1 . 8/21/2008
"For now, not even the neighbor’s radio can disturb
the soft song of the wind and the carol of the birds,"
I liked the whole poem, but that bit just sounds gorgeous :D Perfect rhythm and it almost rhymes.
Good job D