Reviews for Late Summer
Decoris Verbum chapter 1 . 9/1/2008
Ah...freakishly true...

You hit the nail on the head. Like always.

Happy writing.

Eirien chapter 1 . 8/29/2008
Truly beautiful, i like this better than your German poem about summer. You really create a tangible atmosphere in this one, especially with all the adjectives and colours you use and how you adress the different senses.
Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 8/22/2008
Sehr schön, ich setz mich zu dir in den Garten (Balkon, Terrasse, wo auch immer)
Colin Joseph chapter 1 . 8/21/2008
Nothing's happening.

There's sun, scent, radio, birds, but nothing's happening.

Would it not be better to have something happening?

Only a thought. There's nothing wrong with it, necessarily, but it isn't very interesting, because N H.

(You may not want anything to happen, and if so, that's fine too. It's your scene.)
When Twilight Fades chapter 1 . 8/21/2008
"For now, not even the neighbor’s radio can disturb

the soft song of the wind and the carol of the birds,"

I liked the whole poem, but that bit just sounds gorgeous :D Perfect rhythm and it almost rhymes.

Good job D

Twilight Fades.: