Reviews for Remembrance and Revery
Coneyisland-Girl chapter 1 . 8/28/2008
again i dont know what to say really. your poetry is beautiful. my only thought was in the third to last stanza you might say oft' instead of often. i dont know it just seemed like it would fit better with the Tis and the Yet and the SHALL. Your vocabulary is very impressive.. oh and in your 4th to last stanza you spelled feeling as felling. i hate giving reviews with those kind of comments but it would have a different meaning if you said felling so i pointed it out. Thank you for your wonderful words