| Reviews for So What If I'm Blind |
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   JeneyaStorm chapter 5 . 7/6/2010 uh why is she cukoo on d desks? n stuff? |
| JeneyaStorm chapter 3 . 7/6/2010 "Charlie, what can I fucking help you with at freaking 9 in the morning?" -temper how did he get her number? |
| JeneyaStorm chapter 1 . 7/6/2010 "I AM blind you fucking idiot!" -totally did not expect that |
| sealednectar chapter 5 . 4/6/2010 This is quite interesting, but there are some grammatical errors. For example, there are fragmented sentences like: ' "We're here, young one." His gentle raspy voice informed me as I heard the ding.'-after 'young one' it should be a comma, not a full stop, otherwise it doesn't make sense. Also, she wouldn't have to count the steps in her home because she would have learned the layout of the house by then. She would only need to count steps if she's somewhere new/unfamiliar. I wish there was more detail on both the main characters and what they are thinking. Anyway, this has lots of potential and keep writing!:) |
| reizuki chapter 6 . 1/24/2010 haha! this is funny~ lookl forward to the next update. |
| pottymouthannah chapter 5 . 1/21/2010 I love this! It's amazing! update soon~ PLEASE |
| d00fus chapter 3 . 1/7/2010 AW it would be better if she goes all mad shouting "who are you calling an that can't even be seen under a microscope?" or something like that whenever he says the word short xD. |
| Aaerie chapter 6 . 1/7/2010 this story is funny |
| pinkeclipse chapter 6 . 1/7/2010 thank you for the chapter! |
| mykes chapter 6 . 1/6/2010 Yay! A dinner! Oh and I really Xavier's POV. xD |
| mykes chapter 5 . 12/30/2009 Lol, great story. I would absolutely love to see more! I want to see how the characters progress and when and how the romance kicks in, IF there is going to be any romance at all? -hint hint nudge nudge- Heh heh... Happy Holidays! |
| polkadotts chapter 5 . 9/11/2009 you have to seriously update this story its really something! pretty please with a cherry on top :) hope you update soon i liked the part when she smashed her desk lol amazing image |
| WinMyHeart5444 chapter 5 . 8/16/2009 Awh, yay! They are going to work together! THAT makes me happy :) I |
| WinMyHeart5444 chapter 4 . 8/16/2009 Awh, I didn't think it dragged on at all :) I know I'm responding to an old message, but oh well. :D I think it would be adorable if he went to her house or something to win her over. :) Also, I like the Bruce Wayne vibe that Xavier has going on ;) |
| WinMyHeart5444 chapter 3 . 8/16/2009 AH! Haha, this is going to be such a great love story :) I love these types, they make me all smiley :P |