|Reviews for I'm always in love with you|
| May Elizabeth chapter 1 . 10/7/2008
I love the repeatition. Peace.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 9/6/2008
''cause I can't help but dreamin' of you."... but dream of you
I think the I'm always in love with you got a bit repetitive, but I do like the piece. The descriptions with the dragons and Cinderella were really unique. Nice job.
| MagicalThinking chapter 1 . 8/22/2008
This is a lovely poem, your word choice was just simplistic and lovely all wrapped in one... it was sweet, and just heartwarming-something everyone can take a piece from and cherish, yknow? It's relatable and that's just what adds this twist on it, its your story but its always for the rest of the world to relate to... wonderful piece! _ Keep up the great writing! The only thing I thought in it could have been improved, but it was a great poem all the same; the repetition was nice, but a bit much at the end where it said "where you always rescue me from a thousand dragons" -yet then again, it did sort of give you that final blow leaving you hanging in thought..so maybe its just me
_ great piece!
| FieryBeauty24 chapter 1 . 8/22/2008
I really liked your poem. It has a lot of meaning in it.