Reviews for A Trip On the Lips
emilyconnell7 chapter 1 . 12/22/2015
I'm sooooo in love with this story. One of my favourites on here! I NEED A SEQUEL or even just a follow up story on Noah and Aila. Pleeeease!? You can't see it but I'm on my knees begging.

This story is just soooooo amazing ugh.
annayh44 chapter 27 . 8/28/2015
Awww i'm truly in love with this cute hayden & Cira are. .I think she will have twins lol both girl & boy hahaa This story is awesomeeeeeeee
annayh44 chapter 11 . 8/27/2015
so shy guy is not shy at all hahaha jee congratssss
annayh44 chapter 2 . 8/27/2015
Lol Why the guy is so shy. .I thought hot guys are Confident xDD
Guest chapter 7 . 8/19/2015
it's not her i'll betch a
bellababystar13 chapter 25 . 2/26/2015
I love the semi-makeup...
Will I get tanner now?
Alia chapter 7 . 2/3/2015
Poor dude. That would've never worked on me either. If I knew that person and he doesn't know any other girls then herself. It's obviously her! Unless its his sisters which would be weird...
Sarah chapter 27 . 11/30/2014
I love your story it has an amazing plot i wish reality was like that. You did an amazing job!
lihle chapter 25 . 11/27/2014
Best story I have ever read I lve it so much wish it could carrry on but life is lIfe. Thankx
Guest chapter 27 . 11/13/2014
Well that escalated pretty quickly and then bam allhappy and blissful ending. Sadly I still not convinced whether hayden wont lie to her a second time if anything health related ever happens to him. No matter what his excuse is, and I know its hard seeing people you love in pain, but a relationship never works out without trust and honesty. What he has is a reasonable fear but it doesnt make it right or give him an excuse to do what he did. Moments ago he was just talking about not regretting what he did and then the next thing you know hes promising her that he wont lie again. But if it were to happen will he not really lie to her like that again? Sorry but im not convinced, in fact, im almost sure he still will and it irritates me. Im scared of hurting you so I wont tell you the truth, is, and forever will be a selfish reason, no matter how much you sugarcoat it. In the end you only hurt the people you love more and to add to that you create a strain in your relationship and a broken trust. She really deserves a better assurance than that. I mean if hes like that when theyre still boyfriend and girlfriend would you imagine what hed be like when theyre married? What husband would lie to his wife about something so important like his health? Just to quote n unqoute spare her the pain when in relaity hes not, he would only add up to it. It really disappointed me, haydens character that is. What would he do if theyre roles would be reversed? Its not like shed say oh thank you for not telling me I appreciate not knowing you might be dying thanks for sparing me unnecessary pain. Cringe everybody cringe.
DenimKitty chapter 28 . 11/4/2014
Just spent like two hours reading this, and congratulations, it was a good read, few typos here and there but I mean, there are 61 000 words not every single one will be perfect. Anyways, good job for finishing the story, I'm sure you worked hard on this during the 3 years.
333 chapter 6 . 3/14/2014
Marguerite Grimmett chapter 27 . 2/4/2014
Awww that's so cute! I love this story! Sad it's over, but of course you wouldn't drag it on.
Marguerite Grimmett chapter 25 . 2/4/2014
YAYAY Cira and Hayden deserve to be together. I just really hope Hayden wasn't lying about his health. :D
Marguerite Grimmett chapter 16 . 2/4/2014
Nononononononono Cira... aw...
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