| Reviews for A Trip On the Lips |
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   Soen22 chapter 1 . 8/22/2008 :) I loved it! it was really good if a tad short! Only thing is that the timing was a bit rushed other than that it was pretty much perfect update soon! -Soen |
| K.P. Crest chapter 1 . 8/22/2008 wow, i like it so far. and man, is she short! my brother's eleven and he's 5'1"...wow. anyways, please write more! |
| Ultra Glacial Rose chapter 1 . 8/22/2008 Haha. I like this concept. Probably because I did the same with my enemy from grade four... I tripped and PLOP there goes both of our's first kiss. XD I adore it! People continue to update it. w |
| xxdreamxx chapter 1 . 8/22/2008 Tehe. Cute idea. :) I want to see more! |