Reviews for A Trip On the Lips
Soen22 chapter 1 . 8/22/2008
:) I loved it! it was really good if a tad short! Only thing is that the timing was a bit rushed other than that it was pretty much perfect update soon!

-Soen
K.P. Crest chapter 1 . 8/22/2008
wow, i like it so far. and man, is she short! my brother's eleven and he's 5'1"...wow. anyways, please write more!
Ultra Glacial Rose chapter 1 . 8/22/2008
Haha. I like this concept.

Probably because I did the same with my enemy from grade four... I tripped and PLOP there goes both of our's first kiss. XD

I adore it! People continue to update it. w
xxdreamxx chapter 1 . 8/22/2008
Tehe. Cute idea. :) I want to see more!
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