|Reviews for Sycophant Society|
| intensity chapter 1 . 8/22/2008
This is very wordy. Reading this is almost like eating a moutful of peanut butter, it tastes good but doesn't go down well. You have good ideas behind your poetry, but alot of your words ring of prose rather than poetry.
Also when it comes to the summary, instead of saying you don't want to write a summary use a line from your poem or what someone else says about it. That's what they do on the back of books and such. YOu need to say something to try to gain readers.
You have a high vocabulary :) keep writing