aw...really sweet!

xx

wow this is a totally sweet story, i love it :D

another things is that there are no spelling or grammar mistakes and that makes it way more interesting to read. keep on writing :)

most definitely one of the best one shots i have read in a long time. you ought to be patting yourself in the back. i really loved this.

nice work!

I was thoroughly charmed by this! Very, very well done. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.

I'm...speechless. That was pure genius. It was beautiful and sweet. And everything that every girl wants. Kudos to you1

This was so cute! I mean, I kind of saw it coming, but I kind of didn't. I love how sweet it was, and how well I could relate with Grace! :D

oh my gosh; that was so heart- flipping-ly awesome!

good but should have been longer..

] really cute and sweet and adorable and i think you get the point now lol

Cute.

I thought that for the most part, your story was well done. You were able to make her thoughts real which is an accomplishment when you read a lot of stories where the narrator sounds superficial.

I just have a few nitpicks.

You spelled Barnes and Noble incorrectly. You spelled it, Barn and Nobel vs Barnes and Noble which is how it's supposed to be spelled.

“I told you,” James kisses my neck again, “that you where lying.” The "where" should be "were."

There were a couple of places where you missed commas but it's not big deal.

I know that James saying he'll move to England to be with her is supposed to show that he's utterly devoted and in love with her but it's kind of difficult for me to suspend my belief about that. Then again, other reader's may feel otherwise. It may be a matter of chase. I feel like if you had left that part out, it may be a stronger story.

Nice job though.

This was so good. I love it!

Oh my gosh, this is so sweet! I love it!

Hmm...I know a guy like that. I wonder...