wow! Loved the descriptions you used. There is so much depth in your characters. You are so specific which is great- like how you paid attention to how a person doesn't get over a shock quickly. And the start where they were still celebrating the honeymoon was soo romantic! and the end kiss! loved it! update soon.

Love it :)

OMG, I totally forgot about James! but Frank's so sweet. I think he knows more about her than he lets others believe... is he in love with her?

XOXO

I found the exact same picture of the milky way on beautiful and so do your story :D

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Just when it was getting goos. Please update soon :D

woohooo i can't believe it..you finally update..

i'm very happy, i like this chapter a lot because they are so peace together enjoying the cenery and their honeymoon.

you're so detailed about tania emotion and her changing to frank. does frank aware about his changing because tania?

because tania start to question about her feeling.

and the kiss is so emotional and i like it . very much (can you add more?)

i hope you can update regularly, maybe once a week _

thank you for updating and take care

Corrections:

Chapter 7

'He had by this time walked his way over from the sofas and presently stood half a meter in front of me.'

*metre, not meter.

'Agitated, I glared up and blinked in surprise to notice for the first time that his stormy green eyes wasn't entirely green'

*green eyes WEREN'T, not wasn't

Oh, and i like how you end each chapter, always leaves me wanting more. :)

okay first, corrections,

Chapter 2

'He kissed me forehead, turned me around and gave me a gentle push in the direction of the main entrance.'

*He kissed MY forehead.

'Then he went back to reading as if I didn't exist again.'

* I suppose it's fine already, but it would sound better if you either got rid of the 'again', or the 'as if i didn't exist' as it's doubling up right now.

'Not wanting to look like a big,'

*pig not big.

'I only at a little before wiping my mouth sat there just to glare at him.'

* something's not right, maybe adding an 'and' before 'sat' ?

Chapter 4

'when did Frank start getting attracted to quite little girls such as yourself?'

*quiet, not quite.

'Don't you fine me trash as your friend put it?"

* find, not fine.

The ending to chapter 5 was really sweet.

and no offense but I really don't like Tania, she can be so stupid and stubborn :) adds character though i suppose.

I'm getting quite addicted to your story, I guess the fact that I only reviewed on the last chapter is a testimony to that. I'm a bit confused about James and tanias relationship though. They say they are in love but don't talk for ages

But anyway, thanks, I'm loving it :)

*fangirl squeal* So cute! XD

Update please D: ur awesome btw :D

Omggggg. I feel like I am middle-of-the-desert-panting and underwater-for-too-long-gulping for an update. This is by far one of my most favorite stories. And each update is like a breath of fresh air. Pleeeeease, update soon and let me breathe and live.

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NDN

I love this!

I love this story so far! Alot of mob/ganster stories are SO corny and bad, but this is really really good. I can't wait to see where you go next with it, so I hope you update soon!