I love love love your story!

Wow! :) This is such an amazing story so far! :) I can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Peace, Love and Happiness! :)

~Bubbly Girl

I really like your story...but one problem im scared will happen...I can see Liss falling in love with Frank and him still pinning over Cristy...and nothing really bothers more then seeing them married with her feeling hurt and jealous every time Cristy comes by.

My questions first is How long will this story be? I mean don't get me wrong I love the story, but is there not any upcoming conflict/revelations? For example a murder of a relative or someone finding out they're not really in love and just doing this for money or revenge?

I'm just curious on what will happen next.

Anyways Update soon!

Love this story, you're amazing!

I've followed this story since the beginning and with each chapter it gets better and better. I am truly in love with it, your writing is just amazing and I love Frank and Tania they're both so likable and the dynamics between them is great. I'm rooting for them to get together, Frank is just perfect he so protective and macho yet sweet as well and he sounds mega hot I want someone like Frank now! Whenever my phone buzzes I always hope it's fictionpress alerting me that you have posted a new chapter. Words seriously can not describe how much I'm in love with your story I can honestly say out of all the stories I have read on FP yours is honestly the best the plot is fantastic never a dull moment and I love these types of plots involving a gangster and a girl. I wouldn't be surprised if this gets published I'm just so excited for the next chapter and please please please please please please please please make them confess their love for each other soon xxx

Great honeymoon spot. Cant wait for more. Thanks.

Loved the chapter and I can't wait for more :)

So I was initially worried that Liss would develope feelings for Frank too early, but you have actually done a great job at making this story seem realistic. I love how Liss kinda understands that she is somewhat a 3rd wheel when Christina is involved, and how much depth your characters have...gives the story some complexity ;)

Frank -has a mysterious past, he can flirt with Liss to the point of seeming like he might be interested in her, yet still be madly in love with Christina.

Black -seems scary, yet I can't help but to feel like he is a caring individual that has had a rough past and wouldn't actually hurt Liss.

Christina -has a boyfriend (who hasn't been around much might i add) yet you can tell that she's still in love with Frank

Finally, i also really enjoy the fact that nothing is ever clear cut, it makes the story seem unpredictable...i can never tell if Liss might be interested in frank or vis versa or if she truly just sees him as an attractive associate. At this point I'm not sure if frank should be with Liss or Chris or if Liss will end up with James, Frank, or some of the other fascinating characters. It's nice to read a plot that isn't cliched and redundant. :)

If there was anything that was a little off with the characters I would say that I found it a bit wierd that Tania hasn't thought about James more often...since that is the reason why she has to endure so much. Another thing that confuses me is the fact that Frank and Liss, despite their attraction towards one another, have made it clear-from their expressions at the wedding- that they don't care for each other deeply yet Liss seems to be jealous of Chris and Frank even though her and frank's relationship hasn't progressed much to warrent envy.

Last, Liss is a blunt and outspoken girl, so I often wonder why she hasn't asked Frank why he doesn't just try to win Chris back when she obviously still holds feelings for him or how Frank expects Liss to act like a wife yet he is allowed to stay up all night, drinking wine with his ex?

Anyways, bravo! (so far,lol)

GAHHHH you updated and ohmy excited again for the next chapter hehs xD great update! :D

I have to say, this story has peaked my

Although, the ending to this chapter had me a little wary.

a "new unknown emotion"? I really hope she wasn't referring to love especially since it is ONLY chapter 5 and her and Frank don't even know each other yet...that would just seem unrealistic.

Finally achapter!

Frank is sooooo falling for her

I can't wait until the next one!

thanks for the update! as long as you update I will stick to the story_

this is a pretty good story, I like it. Please update soon :D

I did like the beginning! The nervousness is fitting, especially tied in wiu the humerous irony of the situation. Liked this chapter and lookig forward to the next.

-Jasmine