I love this story... But i have seriously taking a big liking to Toby and would love some romance between him and Tania... i know bad little me... Franks cool too and they're awesome together, but i dont know why I just really fell for the idea of Black and Tania...

love moi ;b

Yay another update :)

Cant wait for he next one i love thesse gangster stories

I was wondering how many chapters theres going to be in total

I realize that writing can be difficult, what with life going on and writers block, but I've noticed that you started this project a little over 2 yrs. ago. Is it really THAT hard? I mean, you said that you've arleady planned out the ending;you couldn't have written the "meat" of the story 'along' with the beginning and the ending? Isn't that how it works?

Not to be a total bitch, I must say that I've enjoyed reading what you've posted-so far. Hope to be seeing more from you soon! Good Writing!

Great intro, it makes the reader curious

yaaya! for update!

Lolie!

I am a loyal supporter sweetie. And I can't leave Frank. Not when Tania can be dumb at times. Christy is not too bad but I have this sinister feeling she isn't all sugar. Or I'm just imagining

it. Oh wellie. Its was a good chapter in the sense that it told us all the missing links and that the slow but evidently burning love growing between those two oblivious bozo's. Pardon the language but I'm feeling a little down under. Hope that writers block stays far away love because I can be patient. I just don't like to.

Sincerely,

The hopefully real Mrs. Frank Mallick.

P.S. I actually googled a dating site and typed in there Frank Mallick. Sexy as hell Mob Boss. Waiting to see if any of the Frank's reply. This is what happens when the chapter isn't fast enough.p!

Awesome. I am loving this story. Cant wait for more. Thanks.

Hiya xianzhi,

I like this story very much. Although I'm just really confused about Frank. One moment I think he has something for Tania then the next, I read him having a moment with Christina, even though his revelation that what he felt for Christina is in the past... Hm, I don't know, is he just making Tania jealous instead of vice versa as to what Tania was thinking. (Does that sound confusing or what.)

I can't wait for the next chapter...

more tania and frank action please:)

aww..so Frank does care.. a little

can't wait for their marriage to actually happen..

update soon

I'll forgive you when you update again...but soon!lol

Aw...Frank can be sweet!

Oh, what an amazing story, it has everything I love in it. Please keep up the good work, I really need to read more as soon as possible! ;)

well done. this is an awesome story, can't wait until your next update :) hopefully it's soon!

OH my god! How dare you think of giving up this wonderful, amazing story! That is out of the question! You need to keep going! I'm 100% sure that your other versions of this chapter weren't all that bad. This was such a great chapter! The intensity, the tension, god everything! I love love love it! This is not like any gangster story that I've ever read before! It's simply amazing! Man, please don't give this up! I will be so depressed... I love your writing and your stories! How many chapters is this by the way? God, i love it so much! haha. Please please keep writing! For the sake of your readers, who have very boring lives and only find entertainment reading stories like these becuz they are awesome!

You're great!

ohmigod they are really going to get married...christy isn't going to stop the wedding and is it all for show when it comes to Frank?