Reviews for Stuck With a Gangster
xiomara209 chapter 12 . 7/16/2010
poor tania...how ackward..
Ebony3ssence chapter 12 . 7/16/2010
I love this story! You're an awesome writer. I find all the characters interesting although my favorite are Tally, Frank, Luke, and Balck. I love how they're portrayed. I don't know if it's just me but it seems as tho Chrissy is starting to like Frank again altho he seems divided between them . I wonder how things will work out. Can't wit till u nex update! -Ebz
Letyne chapter 12 . 7/16/2010
I'm more and more curious about frank's behavuour with christy because he said he loves her but it's look like he likes Tania a lot too and don't take well her rejecting him...

Thanks for this new chapter
applenica chapter 12 . 7/16/2010
i like this chap. it's just tania and frank. you're right, common boys usually flirt with any girls even the girl he loves is right his next door. i'm on team tania and frank, you can write their growing habit, personality and finally realize their meant to be...*sigh* it's gonna be long journey...because frank is too stupid enough still loves christina. and i don't like christina in here. why christina seduce frank like that. she doesnt considered tania's feeling. does christina have a husband? please update soon..i miss your story
fromfiction17 chapter 12 . 7/16/2010
Wow. Your story is amazing! Seriously. I love the plot, I love Frank, I love Tania... Man, I love everything about this story. I even love Black and Luke! You're a brilliant writer. You include enough details and descriptions to capture my interest. Usually, when writers write too much descriptions, I get bored so I scroll down to the main conversations. This is actually the first time I read every single word in a story, and I adore every part of it! Personally, I don't think you really NEED a beta reader because your story is all ready incredible as it is, but whatever floats your boat :) Besides, it's probably easier anyways to have someone pay attention to the details while you'll focus on the plot.

I'm very hooked, and I can't wait to see how Frank's feelings for Tania will begin to intensify...

So all in all, you're a gifted writer and I LOVE your story.

UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE. Pretty please? Lol.
Bluecoco100 chapter 11 . 7/3/2010
i love this story, please continue! i love tania and frank's growing relationship :)
Bluecoco100 chapter 10 . 7/3/2010
i loved this chapter and i loved that it was long!
Bluecoco100 chapter 7 . 7/3/2010
I really like this story, please keep writing! The plot has got me so wrapped up! love it, continue! :)
Guest chapter 11 . 6/17/2010
one question things are not going to go well with Christy nd to think he did not even tell her then letting her wear her night gown okay its war no joke i would be PISSED I MEAN PISSED. he does all this 4 Christy and he wont let her see her boyfriend? but he smiles lovingly at her but when it comes to Tania HA! coldness. kk does Black likes Tania? coz all he gives her is empty eyes but when it comes to his sister thats a whole new story. and what his sister said about he likes her and when he heard she was coming he qickely change cloths i was laughing my head off no lie. and it got me thinking. and when the little girl said she wanted Tania i felt bad for him. oh and what colour is Black's hair and eyes? is it brown and if it is, is it light brown or dark brown? i cant wit for more update plz update soon XD
anonymous09 chapter 11 . 6/17/2010
PLS PLS PLS UPDATE!
odieme chapter 1 . 6/15/2010
luv the story...! update soon...! plz...!
kabagirl chapter 11 . 6/6/2010
yiipe you updated, and I liked this chapter, looking forward to your next updater.
Mantis Pie chapter 11 . 6/3/2010
OMG! Lucas, Frank, Black, And Bull are my men! And by that i mean...well i dont know but GAHH!
Lildreamer's handguide chapter 11 . 5/31/2010
YAEAY! ITS HERE ITS HERE! WO!

Firstly, Thank you this is a wonderful birthday gift.

Secondly, OMG!

Why christy? I actually like you!

Tania fight for your man woman!

Doesnt matter if he loves you or not your HIS!

FRANK...I love him... GOD GET OVER HER! You have the perfect girl staring you in the face!

OK love. I loved it! No worries im just stating my frustration of the fictional mind.(Not that reality is that much different).

But sweetie, if I have to wait another birthday for the next update i might just hunt you down...
applenica chapter 11 . 5/31/2010
thanks God..finally you update it. i like it. this is long chapter. i like how tania start to shows her jealousy to frank and christy. what..whatt happens with christy mingle between them. i hate it. why...why...why christy has to ruin them. does frank still loves christy? oh all the problems make my head hurt. please update soon
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