Will you finish the story?

good good good (:

Chelsea is such a bum :/

(i can't use any worse insult because it'll get censored)

Love,

Tee

you most definitely have to continue this. But you know whats freaky about this? It's almost exactly what i had planned for Mia/Vincente in BREAKING PROMISES.

Except Mia doesn't offer him the chance to get back nor does he really fight for it. She just leaves.

- Tee

This is amazing I love this story and I feel so bad for Noelle...Please Update Son!

fantastic story, very real and i can really believe these characters. good plot line and structure, i don't know if you plan to continue this story or not, but either way i really enjoyed reading it

Sry. I know its nit-picky, but it should be "No, if you ever want to speak to me again." And As usual Before the very end of the page. I'm interested to see where this goes, and I love Boys Like Girls . . . but at this point in the story I can't for sure say anything more than I want to see what happens next

When you have scenes with characters shouting, you don't have to stick to capitalizing all the letters, it's slightly painful to read when you have characters TALKING LIKE THIS ALL THE TIME! You could use exclamation points and italicization to show that there's a lot of emotion in their voice.

Yeah, just silly advice from me. :)