|Reviews for Amalia|
| grim'alkin chapter 1 . 4/6/2004
wow! i commend you! great poem and, i think its a great example to support the phrase: NO ONE IS PERFECT. good job!
| Protege chapter 1 . 7/11/2003
This is a rather unique poem. I can definitely see how the ideas came about. I think also that your similes are beautiful, and the punchline is quite effective. However, I think that it is rather disjointed,which, although perhaps making the punchline more effective, does nothing for the poem...I think it would have been just as effective, actually, it you had the poem only as it was in the last verse... Hope that helps...
| Dark Magician2 chapter 1 . 12/18/2002
erm, interesting. nice adjectives.
| EEQ chapter 1 . 4/19/2002
wow...really nice! I like the surprise ending.
| Nuriko No Tenshi chapter 1 . 2/28/2002
Very nice poem. Everything sounds perfect until the end. It just shows that nothing on the outside is as it seems. Her heart is as cold as ice, but her outward beauty betrays all that. It is a very beautiful poem, so write more poetry soon because poems tell us of life, death, passion, all the ways of living.
~nUrIKo nO tEnSHi~
| SaturnsFirefly to lazy to sign in chapter 1 . 11/16/2001
Very, very nice. I have something slightly like this only its a love/hate thing. *snickers* For some reason whenever I think of loving somebody but hating them too, I think of Draco and Harry. *shakes head* I've read to many slash stories...
| Maddy-kun chapter 1 . 10/6/2001
woooow...i love how you added that last part...very nice.
| playerhater1 chapter 1 . 9/28/2001
| Scarlett L. Beckett chapter 1 . 8/29/2001
OOOOOH THE LAST LINE ROX
| To The Limit chapter 1 . 7/26/2001
Even though I read it before, I still like it. Try to find more time to right poetry along with your stories. :)
| Zoe chapter 1 . 5/23/2001
That was great! It sounded totally like either Draco's mom or sister, odes he have one of those? Keep writing on the fire and Ice sequel, Smell ya later!
| ilene chapter 1 . 5/12/2001
Liked it, surprising ending.
| Dawn chapter 1 . 5/9/2001
*applause* I really like the way you twist your plot. You know, like how you talk about something that's perfect and everything, but in the end has a great flaw.
| Basil chapter 1 . 4/25/2001
Intersting peom I liked it.
| Akira Bane chapter 1 . 4/22/2001
Rather pretty, I loved how you lead it up to love to hate. Thanks for reviewing Loctus, I'm not sure either but Egyptian, is something like Hebrew and that is one of the main languages of Egypt. I think they post signs in three languages English, Arabic, and Hebrew. Well I gotta go Bye! Pob Hwyl (good luck in Welsh)