It's great! I love the email format. This seems really interesting right now, and I look forward to more. Write on!

UPDATE AGAIN! :]

Love,

Becca

I love this! It has a totally different format and all that to other stories, since it's made up of notes, emails, etc. And now we know their names!

Love to see what happens next! Update soon!

i absolutely love this story, it's hilarious XD

update soon or my cat will sit on you, be afraid...no really, she's huge

So, I found this half an hour ago and I decided to read this. There were a few spelling mistakes, but that's fine.

Personally, I find this to be an amazing story so far. The idea of this story is creative and I am definitely looking forward to more of this.

Keep up the good work!

- Claustrophobic Caution

it's a good story, but i think it should have a bit of actual story. not just e-mails and texts. i like how it's going but its too complicated. i still love it, _. it's funny.

Wow. This story is so cute. It's funny and not at all cheesy and the characters' voices are so clear and it's great. Yay you!

I really like this! Update! Please:D?

I like how it's written in all emails :)

Ha! I'm Mexican too!... Though I don't look like it, don't have a traditional Mexican family, or am Catholic (though I was raises as one). Oh well, that has nothing to do with the review. I like it, I honest to God do. It's funny, mysterious, sweet. If you keep coming I'll keep on reviewing...

bisous, planet mars

Wow, this is really good! I expected you to have like a million reviews cuz it's really fabulous!

I hope Charmed wins their game!

Keep up the fabulous work!

Update soon!

~Cookie

So now that I've had time to actually process everything, I'm liking this quite a lot. I'm not sure if you've ever read this story, though I'm pretty sure you have, Letter Tag by Dillusional. Unfortunately, she took it down from the site. But if you have read it, just the part when they're communicating through the letters reminds me of how you're writing your story. But, obviously, it was a completely different story as it had scenes from outside the letters and the eltters honestly weren't that big a part of the plot. But anyways, it just reminds me of it. Also, I'm having trouble keeping track of the guy and girl e-mail to e-mail. I'm not sure if that's something you can fix or if it's just me or if it's just because we don't really have a feel for the characters just yet. I just wanted to let you know. Either way, it's turning into a pretty different story and other than the similarity to the letters in Letter Tag, I don't think it's close to anything I've ever read. Keep it up! (:

This is a pretty neat idea. It's way too late (for me) to keep reading but so far - once I figured out who was who - I like it. I will review in later chapters and clue you in on what I think. As far as my knowledge of this story goes, keep it going. I'm interested, for sure. (:

Haha, good job. I like stories like this. You've managed to give your character a good oulined sketch... Please update soon! :)

P.S - I would be grateful if you would read my first story written here and give your feedback. I'm am kind of new here. So I would really appreciate it if you tell me what you think about my story. Thanks! Bye!

Can't wait for the next one. I love stories told like this... but only when the characters get developed correctly.

Love,

Becca

Hahaha. this is cute so far. I like it. )

I'd write some big detailed review but I'm lazy tonight, plus I can't identify anything wrong... Update soon. )

-Necia