Reviews for my disassociated fantasy
Moon-Chaser chapter 1 . 8/26/2008
Oh I like this, strange and different and something that really facinates me.

Keep it up.
Some Stranger chapter 1 . 8/25/2008
I liked this. The emotional imagery was great.
A. Harrison chapter 1 . 8/24/2008
I really must say that my favorite lines in this are what you put to describe the poem.

"I hold the pen, but she writes the words / And when I read, it's a strangers life."

By far the most enticing piece of the poem. Great job.