Reviews for Reasons why I hate Trentsville
auel chapter 7 . 7/21/2009

More updates are good for the soul!

Sunshine Bear chapter 7 . 7/21/2009

There is just something about it. It makes me want to become a demon...

Like kill someone, kill myself, get sent to hell and tell the devil to make me a demon.

dreamercrys chapter 7 . 7/21/2009
I knew it! How the hell did Noah get outside after he passed out? I mean his father and brother were in the room with him... And what is a Wendigo? Can't wait for more!
shellbell10 chapter 7 . 7/21/2009
... What just happened lol
Poptart Guava King chapter 7 . 7/21/2009
um. more confusion. :'(

i got a terrible headache all through reading this...(not because i was reading it) but i HAD to finish the chapter! :D

thanks for the update...whats a Wendigo?
Feel The Waltz chapter 6 . 7/20/2009
Enjoyed this chapter so much, i read the entire story when i was off sick work :D Just thought i'd share that with you... :)
dreamercrys chapter 6 . 7/17/2009
I am so confused... What is Noah and what is Night and what are his brothers? And what is the difference between wolf-spirits and werewolves? And why is Night keeping an eye on him when his cousin likes him? Does Night like Noah?

I bet his cousin is either Matt or Walsh. Can't wait to see what happens next...
runaway sheet chapter 6 . 7/17/2009
Who's Night's cousin?

Finally, the demons enter. I was wondering which 'demons' were going to be in this story. Werewolves, and wolf spirits and whatnot, eh? Cool. I wanna see more.

Oh, here's a grammar tip.

you are you're

belonging to you your

This chapter had a lot of these and bothered me a bit coz I had to decipher which meaning you meant.

On the bright side, I've noticed that you've become more concise, which is amazing because usually an author is either concise or not. But you're working towards it. So, keep it up.

Oh, and I hope I don't need to use a cattle prod to remind yuo to update.
TheLadyPendragon chapter 6 . 7/16/2009
I think Night's cousin is Matt. LOL, but the scene with Night and Noah was pretty cute. :D I liked the chapter. It was g-grreaatt! Really great! Man, though, werewolves? Poor Noah. xD Can't wait for more!

P.S. I don't know if you'll be interested, but there is a new award for slash fiction on FP. It's much like the SKoW (Some Kind of Wonderful) awards, except just for slash. It's called the Sweet-Revolution Awards. The link is: [ sweet - revolution . webs ] without the spaces. Nominations will last until August 8th. You can't nominate yourself, but, being a slash fiction autjor, I thought you might like to go nominate your favorite slash stories here on FP? If the link doesn't work, you can also find it on my profile, as I'm judging two of the categories. Please thing about it.
Lerene chapter 6 . 7/16/2009
Exciting chapter. My guess is that Matt is Night's cousin
Poptart Guava King chapter 6 . 7/16/2009
oh...kay...then...? night's a creeper. XD
Sunshine Bear chapter 6 . 7/16/2009
My hair fell down from my ponytail.

Just so you know.

I FREAKING love this story. It is so action pack without the fighting. Ah. It is amazing.
JtheChosen1 chapter 6 . 7/16/2009

Man, does that mean he can regain his sight again with some magic voodoo?

Great work here, you really kicked up the mystery and action!
thecowonthebox chapter 6 . 7/16/2009
I definitively love this story !

Please update soon !

I think I know who Night's cousin is
overlordpotatoe chapter 6 . 7/15/2009
Ooh, now we're getting into the fantasy stuff! I like!

One thing: You frequently use 'your' instead of 'you're' when you contracting 'you are'. Just thought I should point that out, as you may not have realised you were doing it and knowing may help to avoid it in the future. I know I constantly switched tenses in my writing until somebody pointed it out.
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