Reviews for Ocean's Prisoner
Mysterious MD chapter 5 . 7/19/2010
This is a really good story, the grammar and spelling look great, and the overall story itself is really well done. I don't know if you plan to continue this or not but it is really good. Keep up the great writing.
A Sweet Escape chapter 1 . 12/21/2009
Wow, it's so intense and so amazing. I especially love the imagery-it's so vivid and descriptive; my favorite. The end was the absolute best though, "The sun finally drowned, and the ocean and its two prisoners were thrown into darkness." That was really brilliant. Keep up the great work.

AbbieLou chapter 5 . 9/7/2009
this is a really good story and I hope you continue to write it.
eternita chapter 4 . 5/26/2009
This is for me a completely new subject and therefore very interesting. I hope you will update soon.
Ray-Anne chapter 4 . 4/19/2009
She seems so ... human

it was very nicely detailed, as well as Chance with his interaction with the sea.
Chris Rhyanne chapter 4 . 4/19/2009
Ah... I have a feeling that both of their promises will not be kept... Good chapter. I'm kind of confused, though - if it was really his first time on shore, why did he seem so comfortable there? Also, this instant love feels a little... instant. There wasn't much time for feelings to develop. I can understand that they might be interested in each other, but I don't know about romance after such a short meeting.

Other than that, awesome! Keep up the good work.
inkypinkyanna chapter 3 . 4/13/2009
aw, your a reli good author. i liked the hot chocolate thing, and i dont live on the street, but good hot chocolate is still hard to come by!

and it was, i'm in awe. that was soo awesome!

and the fact she couldnt say about where she lived...and the fact that she had to get back to the shelter so she got a spot. it was incredibly sweet. loved it!

and the line that has been used so many times.. "can i see you again?"

incredibly sweet and touching.

pwetty pwease with chelsea, and a cherry on top update soon?

inkypinkyanna chapter 2 . 4/13/2009
okay, now this is seriously cool! i love it! there is no doubt about it! it is absolutly awesome!

inkypinkyanna chapter 1 . 4/13/2009
oh. exciting. it sounds like an actual story opening. i want to pick up the book now lol. evil person. hehe. what is done, is done i guess
Ray-Anne chapter 3 . 4/13/2009
It's got personality, the entire writing. Very nice and well written. I like how the flow is going
Miz Calixte chapter 1 . 4/7/2009

C'mon, pweease? Ill do almost anythng! its so addactive!

If it were for sale in the shops i would buy it! (Ahem, dont get any ideas, not till you've finished it!)

Luv ya, pumkin,

Miz, Calixte 8P
Miz Calixte chapter 2 . 3/31/2009
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG! What do you think you are DOING?

Up date NOW!

I mean NOW, NOW! tjis is SO GOOD! im getting depressed!

Finish it!



I luv ya!
Mercyette chapter 2 . 3/11/2009
This was another good chapter. I still find your descriptions very interesting and engaging. You ended the chapter on a nice note and your characters were interesting, too. I would have liked to know a little more about what happened in Chelsea's past, but I think some more will be revealed in later chapters.

I noticed a little something, "Making her was towards the door..." It needs to be "making her way." I hate it when Word doesn't catch that stuff, lol.

Good job. This is going on my alert list. :)
Ray-Anne chapter 2 . 3/11/2009
Very nice...You do really well with the detail,
Chris Rhyanne chapter 2 . 3/10/2009
You know, I was just thinking about this story, saying to myself, "Gee, I remember this. I wonder if this story will ever update? It sure looks interesting - I would hate to think that the first chapter was it and that this story would be added to an ever-growing pile of one-chapter stories on my alert list." Now that notion is null and void - forget I said anything.

I like the chapter, although I do think it is a bit strange that she is so comfortable with having only a fourth-grade education. Surely she goes to the library sometimes? I understand her fears of water, though. You have a pretty good image of that (I'm slightly hydrophobic myself!) and the reason behind it. Strangely, I'm having a bit of trouble picturing Tarrytown. Where is this? What country? Is there a definite country? Is it modern? Run down? Middle ages? No, not middle ages... I don't really get it so much... But you have to understand that I also have trouble telling my right hand from my left hand, so it might just be me. I'm captivated to stick around until I find out.

But I love it so far, and... darn you! Update!

~Chris Rhyanne
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