I enjoy the mystery alot, its one of my fav. genres. I thought the development of the story was good, I could imagine "the others" in my mind as I read each chapter. Although I don't have to much experience with writing Sci-fi/Mystery I really love this story. I'll be looking forward to a updates if you continue.

I really like the start. It make me want to read more! Can't wait to read the rest.