|Reviews for Suspension|
| thebloodfiend chapter 1 . 9/12/2008
| heart'sespionage chapter 1 . 9/4/2008
you shocked me at the end. i just feel that with all the beautiful imagery you lead me back into the mundane
"But today, I am fine with just laying,
Neither laying somewhere real,
Nor suspended within time,
I am fine."
not that that's a bad thing, the rhyme works and it definitely leaves an interesting effect
| Doxology chapter 1 . 9/1/2008
I adore this. It just flows and flows and flows and then the last line just smacks you in the face. I LOVE the last line. And the poem as a whole.
| ZombieMcQueen chapter 1 . 8/29/2008
hm *smiles* so serene.
sorry, I know that doesn't mean much, but I thought i'd share that particular feeling