Reviews for Suspension
thebloodfiend chapter 1 . 9/12/2008
very sweet
heart'sespionage chapter 1 . 9/4/2008
you shocked me at the end. i just feel that with all the beautiful imagery you lead me back into the mundane

"But today, I am fine with just laying,

Neither laying somewhere real,

Somewhere divine,

Nor suspended within time,

I am fine."

not that that's a bad thing, the rhyme works and it definitely leaves an interesting effect
Doxology chapter 1 . 9/1/2008
I adore this. It just flows and flows and flows and then the last line just smacks you in the face. I LOVE the last line. And the poem as a whole.


ZombieMcQueen chapter 1 . 8/29/2008
hm *smiles* so serene.

sorry, I know that doesn't mean much, but I thought i'd share that particular feeling