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curse you and your AP bio-ness, ducky. XD

i like the REM thing - very extremely clever - but that falls under ap bio too.

and when you cut up your portions of the story, chica, you might want to use the line function. unless you're putting them there for a reason...

o interesting! i like this story. great characters that are humorous, and good story. nice

great, likable characters

fantastic introduction. it grabs the reader's attention. i liked the last two lines. the descriptions were also amazing

this story is a great break away from what we call the "traditional" fantasy aka "have the kid fall into a fantastic land filled with elves that look like bloom and crazy voldemort figures and a lion that eats everyone and saves the world with a ribbon on his paw." very realistic, very humorous, very refreshing from the serious work.

you have some good stuff going on here - NO DON'T YOU DARE BE NEGATIVE - keep writing, okies? i'm adding you onto alerts.

The "A crumpled wad of paper flew silently across the room" scene was brilliant.

Plus the legacy kids and emergeincy kids, yep, I've seen them.

Nice chapter btw, later!

Nice little prologue you got here. "How could it be that demons and Christ coexist within a single individual?" Trust me, I still look at my ex, and I still have no idea how she does it.

neet consept... it needs some refining, but its great for a first draft.

The summary really caught my eye. Very interesting premise, and I'm curious what you'll do with it.