| Reviews for Special Slave |
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   Frail.Wings.Of.Vanity chapter 8 . 7/9/2009 Good chapter, Gup-chan! I think the girl is falling for her master. That would sulk xDD |
| AlijaS117 chapter 8 . 7/7/2009 update soon! |
| blankee chapter 1 . 7/7/2009 awesome! nice start btw! |
| Perfectly Mythical chapter 8 . 7/7/2009 Oh, I'm feeling dread for the upcoming events and Silenciaricus |
| Perfectly Mythical chapter 7 . 7/5/2009 Poor Angel... |
| ShredBetty16 chapter 7 . 5/7/2009 ah! I love it! It's a little jumpy at first, but still freaking awesome. write more please. and I'll try to get Midnight Heartbreak up soon, just hang in there, thanks for the reviews :] |
| Adis Crow chapter 7 . 4/13/2009 His brother-interesting. I love the way Michael gets on dear Millael's nerves. And it's intriguing the way you gave both of them angel or angel-esque names. Foreshadowing? Osprey |
| anaa-pixie chapter 7 . 4/5/2009 ok heres the thing: THIS STORY ROCKS continue writing if its the last thing you do! |
| anaa-pixie chapter 6 . 3/31/2009 ok little confusing but it is a very very good story! |
| Vampire Ash chapter 6 . 12/24/2008 Gah! Pul-lease continue! ish really good! |
| Adis Crow chapter 6 . 12/2/2008 I love your writing so much! You have such a wonderful, imaginative style-it sort of reminds me of the dialogue in some mangas I've read. Osprey P.S. Are you really from The Netherlands? I've been meaning to ask for awhile. |
| AlijaS117 chapter 6 . 11/20/2008 love it |
| Frail.Wings.Of.Vanity chapter 6 . 11/20/2008 awesome chapter! i think you're writing is improving, keep it up. :3 |
| Jenni Mills chapter 4 . 10/5/2008 'Teacher takes my hand and brings me to somewhere.' This is a week sentence, be more specific. Something like 'Teacher takes me to a room with white walls' ... would do the job. 'my sanity disappears'. Dramatic, but it could be a little better. For example 'my sanity slips from me' Great chapter. The Demon king looks even more evil but the angelic realm looks pathetic - how will the poor little angel cope? I loved the section where she even owns her seperation from the angelic realm by telling them they have no power over her - maybe that will be to her benefit one day? |
| Jenni Mills chapter 3 . 10/5/2008 "You can bring one slave together with you." This sentence is a bit awkward, leave out 'together' and it would make more sense. Also, I'm a little confused about the pendant. It's hidden between the wings? At the back? I just can't picture this. But otherwise, a great chapter and I like the implication of a relationship between the two other slaves. Of course I can see where this is heading. I'm a little worried about the theme (submissive female, powerful male). But only because I want you to be a well ajusted person. LOL I'm happy to read about it. |