Reviews for blame love on time
Cindy Moon chapter 1 . 8/27/2008
There's different ways certain lines can be read; it's good. It's really good. Great concept and great delivery.

-Cindy Moon *)
Gredd chapter 1 . 8/26/2008
wow. This poem took me two read-throughs to fully absorb it, it was that well-done. The language, the message and tone were all exceptional. I particuliarly love the last stanza, how it drove home the message about (I could be wrong here but) how time tied with human nature gets in the way of love. Anyway,I'll stop pretending I'm in english class and just congratulate you. You've got major talent.
Aquafied chapter 1 . 8/26/2008
you can call me sara

and i'm always glad to read poetry. well, usually. always is a bit of a stretch.

is this about not really belonging to each other

but to some cosmic way of belonging to history and such

if not, i am afraid i have lost the point
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 8/26/2008
"because nature is in human/and human nature forbidden".. the human and human nature sounded awkward to me

Also it seemed odd that there was only one period in the entire piece

I did like it though, the ending was especially great and I also like the rhyming throughout, it works nicely, which is hard to do a lot of times without a rhyme scheme. Really nicely done.