Reviews for Small lies
Averybarbarian chapter 1 . 10/24/2008
"Why did the silence become our last words?" This line is so powerfull! 'Tis so heartrendering and so much sorrow! Well done I enjoyed this piece.
May Elizabeth chapter 1 . 10/7/2008
Again very relatable. Peace.
Anex .B. Cougar chapter 1 . 9/15/2008
everybody lies, its one of those sad facts of life in the end though love if its true will pull you though
Zenith Void chapter 1 . 9/10/2008
Wow... that was really good. Lol, I really liked the ending.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 9/6/2008
I like the idea here, very relateable. The descriptions are really great, though bees don't really like roses that I know of... Still it was a bittersweet piece.
Unknown Survivor chapter 1 . 9/1/2008
Very relatable. Nice work on this.

Unknown Survivor
XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 8/31/2008
Love this! I can relate. Adding to C2 awsome job!
Counting Petals chapter 1 . 8/28/2008
I loved the first stanza - that really jumped out at me. Nicely done )
Hope's Demise chapter 1 . 8/28/2008
this is cool. I really like it!
Scarlett Wynter chapter 1 . 8/26/2008
"you learned to say 'i love you' even if you didn't mean it" - that line really stuck with me. Great work on this.
Isca chapter 1 . 8/26/2008
"Why did the silence become our last words?" Aww! So sad! I loved the last part. Great work! :)
The Reverse Edge Blade chapter 1 . 8/26/2008
このポエムはよかったですよ。ちょっとなかいです、けどよかったメッセージです。ふかいぶんで、いいメタフォールです!がんばって、ね!

The Reverse Edge Blade