Reviews for The Story of Umm
dinodaw chapter 1 . 7/30/2009
"Uh! You said umm!" Thats great. So are the horse legs floating or what?


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Double AA chapter 1 . 10/19/2008
Hey, sorry I haven't reviewed earlier. But anyway here it is now.

This is a fun story, especially because I was there when you started it. One question: What is with the unicorn? I want to hear(or read) the back story to this(if there is one).

Double AA
Yoirru Maeri chapter 1 . 8/26/2008
Oh my! What a lovely story! I'd like to hear more, and I'll keep a look-out! The only thing I can find wrong with it! I'll find something to improve upon later, I'm sure. Jenny Craig seems to have a bit of a bossy side, and Umm is cool. I hope the have many more adventures! {With someone documenting them, as well.}