Oh my Gosh. This was incredible! You're an amazing poet! It flowed and it rhymed and it had feeling. Not many people can write things this great!

it makes me sad to read and brings back stories of how it was so, wonderful in the beginning and in the end it's not how they lived happily ever after at all. To be strong we must endure and in the end all will be made well again. It makes for good poetry, and I look forward to see more.

loved your description of a heart beating, love, and heart break. :)

Very creative. I don't really know what to say except that I like it and I wish I could come up with stuff like that...

OH MY GOODNESS ME.

I'm definitely obsessed with this poem. I can totally relate, I think a lot of people have felt what you feel. I love the way it flows too, it's almost like a song.

Aw, this is sad yet somehow sweet all the same. This is really good and I like the way you used a "heart" in this poem. Nice work with this, I really enjoyed reading.

Loved this very much. I especially like the pockets part. :)

Aw. Sad. Cute, but sad. I like it.

aw it's so sad...but i like it

Aw...

that's so sad...

I'm sorry if that actually happened.

It's a beautiful poem, but sad too. Great job.