Reviews for Beat
Broken-Angel-1994 chapter 1 . 11/11/2009
Oh my Gosh. This was incredible! You're an amazing poet! It flowed and it rhymed and it had feeling. Not many people can write things this great!
eerie regard chapter 1 . 12/15/2008
it makes me sad to read and brings back stories of how it was so, wonderful in the beginning and in the end it's not how they lived happily ever after at all. To be strong we must endure and in the end all will be made well again. It makes for good poetry, and I look forward to see more.
LeLa London chapter 1 . 12/15/2008
loved your description of a heart beating, love, and heart break. :)
All.PenNames.Must.Be.Unique chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
Very creative. I don't really know what to say except that I like it and I wish I could come up with stuff like that...
MakeSarahSmile chapter 1 . 11/19/2008

I'm definitely obsessed with this poem. I can totally relate, I think a lot of people have felt what you feel. I love the way it flows too, it's almost like a song.
Unique1952 chapter 1 . 9/8/2008
Aw, this is sad yet somehow sweet all the same. This is really good and I like the way you used a "heart" in this poem. Nice work with this, I really enjoyed reading.
crystalised chapter 1 . 9/5/2008
Loved this very much. I especially like the pockets part. :)
Tiernan Hunter chapter 1 . 9/2/2008
Aw. Sad. Cute, but sad. I like it.
crimson-reverie chapter 1 . 8/28/2008
aw it's so sad...but i like it
Always In Motion chapter 1 . 8/27/2008

that's so sad...

I'm sorry if that actually happened.
WiccanGypsy chapter 1 . 8/27/2008
It's a beautiful poem, but sad too. Great job.