Reviews for Fix Or Fall
Really REALLY Fantastic chapter 1 . 1/11/2011
If you ever manage to escape the obscurity of being one of a million writers on a website, you could be seen by the general population as something great. I mean, really fantastic. You've got potential and salt, which most writers would kill for, so don't give it up or let it down. It'd be an injustice.
Twist Their Emotions chapter 2 . 12/14/2008
Wow. Great. You really have some great lines in everything you write. The whole concept is deliciously heart-breaking. I loved this as a one-shot. Loved this as a two-shot. (?) Will love it if you add more. Just great writing overall. It really digs into human emotions.
all you need is oxygen chapter 1 . 10/4/2008
you're crazy.

you write beautifully.

albeit, this was a little confusing. i think it was the breaking of the paragraphs.

but still. amazing.

"we met and we crashed, crashed so brutally hard against the asphalt i still have marks." that was amazing. i would give anything to have written that.

cheers.
Twist Their Emotions chapter 1 . 10/2/2008
Beautiful. Seriously.
D.B. Ambs chapter 1 . 8/27/2008
wow, powerful. Very good, I loved it!
Koki Enwai chapter 1 . 8/27/2008
Oh, brilliant! I loved the intensity of it. The imagery is wonderfully done; harsh, yet poetic. Loved it. :)

- Koki