Reviews for Hopeless
t-t-t-ouch chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
I think the beginning of this seemed kind of off kilter, but the ending really pulled it all together great.

Good job.
Isca chapter 1 . 8/29/2008
Good emotion and devotion in this poem. I liked the repetition of the word 'hopeless' throughout the piece. Sometimes, love hurts!