Wow wonder what he did I hope you keep on writing. I feel so bad for Mey to be in that situation. Are they ever going to have children. Imagine how they will turn out with those parents. What's the deal with Lester I feel like he's important but why. What is norsarion hiding and I hope he grows to love Mey because they seem perfect together. Update soon. Please. :)

i think i already know what he did. he's gay isn't he. pretty obvious if im correct. you write beautifully but if im right this is gonna get sadder. :( however i hope you prove me wrong!

you have GOT to update this story. i am still reading it, even up to now! i read it again, even! you MUST update. please.

i don't think you should have put up that author's note about itbeing slash, cause now, i can guess wht norsarian doesn't like mey.

you have to continue this. you just have to! really, you have to. i fell in love with meynessa and her shyness. and i keep sympathizing with her love for him. and i want to find out what he did! and what do you mean.. slash? like.. he's gay or soemthing? lol. please please. update. :)

OMG I really like this so far! Wait... scratch that, I love this so far! Please keep updating! I want to find out more! Pretty pretty please!

Love this, please keep going.

seems interesting

update soon pls

This is really, really good. I'm sure you've heard that before.

I love Norsarion. Maybe I'm just attracted to difficult, withdrawn men. But I think he's secretly in love with Mey and just afraid to admit it. Also, I want to know what his deep dark secret is!

I'll admit to not liking Mey that much. She's just so vacillating. It frustrates me. She needs to step on and get over her shyness if she ever expects her husband to like her!

I'm glad to know this is entirely written, so I can count on there being more at a regular rate. Please update this soon!

~~Mazzie~~

O! I remember that part! You posted it in your journal, way back when. 8D

Mey reminds me of a rabbit. A white furred, floppy eared rabbit. Quiet and adorable and delicate, and nibbly.

So does Sarny have a meaning, or is it a family name?

...oh. So it's a place.

...now that I think about it, I don't think I've ever before encountered a story like this. I mean, I've seen plenty about unrequited love, but they've all (mostly) ended happily.

But they've never been between married persons before. This is really original. It's a whole new level of tragic.

And the end of this chapter induced even moar BAW.

Gah! The names! Norsaroth! Rydnessa! Norsariel! Argh!

...so does this mean that the first part is like the family name, and the second is the number of the child?

...little Norsa is way. too. cute. *moar BAW*

;_;

This story is crazy wangsty.

I love this sentence/fragment/part/bit: "Mey liked pretty things"

Hrmm? Norsa went to the academy to study runology? I thought he went off and studied sword stuffs, and then got expelled. Or was it that he went off to study sword stuff instead of runology? ...he didn't double major, did he?

And why was he expelled? (I mean, yeah, I'm pretty sure it has to do with Linove, but I don't know what.)

And dude. Your vocab is pwning me. In my NaNo, I avoided long advanced words like crazy. They take too much thought. I am impressed. You zoomed through this and still had time to use good words.

Oh, and I forgot to add this in my first review - I love Mey's sisters. I think they are some of the awesomest awesome in this story.

Aha! So they do all start with 'Mey'. Why is that? Isn't it odd to call her Mey, and not the others? Why does she get the nickname?

Is it a thingy for Xureyan peoples to name their kids like that?

Zomg little Norsa BAW

Even more BAW - Mey apologizing for not enjoying the party. ;_;

(But I thought he was four years/springs older than her? Possible typo? - it says he's 16 and she's 11.)

BAW Mey is so tragically angstily adorable. I luv her. ;_;

OH MY GAWSH I LOVE THIS

Poor Mey. ;_;

I really like how well you've delved into her character. Yay, development! 8D

Some questions.

How many days are in a week? Are you modelling time in Nurenbel (do you still call it that?) after time on Earth?

Do all of Mey's sisters have names that start with 'Mey'?

I like it alot. I don't have much time to review, but I read through five chapters straight, so I think that says something. Only error I noticed was "dong" instead of "doing" and I think that was in the last chapter. Very good. I like it. I'll keep reading once you add more.