yep! cliche, but still cute!

Made my day! :D

I lost track of how many times I "Aww!"-ed. Amazing story and I love the whole "nerd and jock in love but are secretly dating" cliche. I kind of wished this was a multi-chaptered story... Oh well. You're a great author :)

-TeddyBearHugs

:) Made me smile. :D

Very cute, great work!

loved it

I've got to admit, if it wasn't for the cute descriptions and cliché-yness of everything I would have stopped reading in the middle of the story.

But I'm really glad I carried on because I loved the ending.

It's so cute and corny, but I like that. c:

However, it does get a little bit repetative at times. Using words you've already used quite a lot.

It was still a great story though and I loved it. c:

Again, the lack of commas accompanying dialogue bothered me, as well as how childish and unbearably gooey they were. Their romance felt a little unrealistic. I wish there was more tension (from their differences), so they would have more chemistry and less cutesy-ness. I also thought the writing was a little elementary, and that he challenged her more, despite him being "the stupid one." I also wish why they're attracted to each other was explained more. Still, I'm glad xoxluurve added this to our c2.

It is cliche, but it's cute. :) The only thing, though, is I noticed a lot of gramatical mistakes, like missing commas and then commas in weird places. Just FYI.

:) Kaylee

aww this was so cute )

heii

i loved it plz update son

its so cute ah so good

Lol

cute story :)

wow, it really did surprised me that they have been dating for 5 months...yet it really is cute

i'm amazed to the flow of the story...i love it _

I love it so cute. I'm a sucker for sweet stories no matter how cliched although I get goosebumps from too much sweetness lol. Anyway, I love the ending it's quirky and it leaves space for imagination. Nice work

corny and cliche it is, but I still love it